I think you did a great job portraying Six, she’s definitely Spartan like material but I also like how there’s the more human side? Lol not sure what to call it but the subtle emotions really make her intriguing. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

First off great chapter! Second off that subtle data pad reference in the beginning of the chapter was brilliant!

Great chapter. I think you did well in portraying her as a Spartan. I like how you added her voice as raspy since she doesn't talk much, which I also think adds to her aloofness. Loving the story so far can't wait for more!

If you need help with understanding the Spartans you could check the channel of installation 00 more specifically the lore and theory of Spartans never die

Pd: nice book so far, man

Great story so far!

continue please

This is really good so far. Can't wait to see how the story progresses and when we see Master Chief.