Luna and Sam's worst fears have been realized: their kids love Justin Beiber. At that point he'd probably be washed up though but hey, infamy lasts forever. I figured Lincoln would put on some muscle spending much of his time carry what could probably be over 100 pounds daily. Guy was bound to get buff and now he can go one his way to being ripped.

I had a clue Ronnie was a switch hitter when she was eager to set her friends up with comatose Linc. Cuckquean fetish aside, there's bound to be hints of bisexuality with a woman who doesn't mind engaging in what could casual threesomes with another woman.

We all know this is the result of spite though from two different ends, Ronnie and Luna's and Lincoln was smart to recognize it as such at let it be in spite of the hurt it caused. I'm sure it'll work out in the end, if not then it looks like Stella was still interested. If only he wasn't a full time dad though

Man, I get that Luna feels the need to get even with Lincoln but she doesn't have to antagonize him constantly. And Lincoln should just give up on Ronnie Anne now, it's not worth it.

This was a very comfortable chapter. No hijinks (not that they aren't enjoyable) but just simple slice of life. The children are energetic and fun to read and I like how you've captured the fanon personalities while adding your own flavor. Bringing up Lori's children with Bobby makes me want to see how the Santiago-Loud kids interact and deal with their numerous cousins. I can already see the mischief Lupa would get up to.

I don't mean for this to sound negative or anything but I feel like you should change the name of this. It feels really disconnected from the fanfic it's supposed to be connected to and at this point, feels like its own entity.

Last part hits the feels. I don't point out mistakes much in comedy type stories. Bobby must be spoiling his kids along with Lincoln's which I guess is a good sign of how accepting he is. Could have made Lynn The Third be Boy Lynn but a nerdy version of Lacy is ok too.

Cute as always! I half wonder why isn't Lisa seen as the mother if she's the one that brought the majority of the children to term, but also guessing she wasn't the type to hold and get pictures taken of herself holding the babies after she's given birth to them. I do have an idea of Lincoln dealing with a baby who's fusing for her momma. Thinking of that episode Cover Girl's and Lincoln's costume trunk...

I'd say Rita and Lynn deserve it since raising 11 kids of their own was hard enough but now it's definitely Extreme Mode, forget Hard Mode. Hard Mode left the building after Sid, Sam, Vikki, and the others. I definitely commend anyone who can keep their food down after 'that' as well. Sounds like someone should wear a hazard mask during that job ha ha. Lisa's forgetting that the most important aspect of school isn't education but socializing with your peers and developing social skills, glad Rita had to remind her.

These are good but I can't help but wonder where most of the kid's personalities comes from. For example, Lupa is a bit of a troublemaker already even though that aspect about her usually comes from her experiences from people in the outside world. I get that this story is mostly just for fun and the lore doesn't matter that much but you would think that Lupa's shenanigans would be stopped by her parents or aunts quickly.

God, I just really love the way you write their relationship...ALL their relationships. It's a dash of sexiness every now and then (which believe me, is HIGHLY appreciated by yours truly) parapeted by this really comfy, sweet, brother-sisters dynamic that keeps the story reading so beautifully. Even when there's a little spite at play it's really, really cute spite!

Honestly I just adore all these characters and the way you write them, and watching them come together into this unconventional, but loving, devoted family really just makes me feel happy to read. It's just a really pleasant, optimistic experience; popcorn for the soul. The kids too, they're so cute! And I'm not even a main guy of sin kids either. Gosh, what a wonderful fic. It's so dang sweet the way Lincoln tries to console Luna and make excuses for Lyra not being too attached yet, even when his sister is being a bit of a brat to him. He loves her. In addition, I was particularly captivated and impressed by the way you wrote the scene where Lincoln, the well-practiced dad, engineers a way to get Lina to drink without being fussy. That whole bit had the whiff of truth to it, it makes me feel like you have kids yourself to get it to feel so authentic (although I won't ask, since prying into people's personal lives isn't right.) It's just the impression I got, is what I'm saying. Sam being intimidated by how easy he makes it look was good too, and Luna's horror at the idea of being pulled back into baby jail.

Good little lines too, like 'preventing Lina's greed from becoming regret.' You've really got a great style and I feel like you get to show your stuff with this series perhaps a little more than usual, not that your other stories aren't great too. Specifically you have a terrific grasp on how to really exalt the charm of the characters' interpersonal relationships, at least to me. Lot of relatable, human stuff to make the core of it feel strong and that results in the more outlandish stuff landing too. It's like that old saying "you're telling me a, b and c are right, I know a and b are true so c must be right as well!" Since all the emotional foundation is there, you can go off the beaten track without it feeling whimsical or fake! I really think that's the key to why this story works so well.

God, they really are SO damn adorable. The babies I mean. Sorry, just re-reading the thing. It's just great fun to watch Lincoln and the Loud girls be parents together. Amazing work, man. Thanks for the new chapter.

Chapter 7 was cute!

It's hard to tell if Luna is jealous or simply doesn't like being instructed as if she doesn't have a clue about what she's doing but it's nice to see the interaction between her and Lincoln as they most certainly have the biggest connection right now even if it's mostly because of Lisa. I like that it's not complete water under the bridge yet because no one washes their hands of something like that completely.

20 toddlers undergoing potty training is a nightmare I can't even fathom, I wish Linc all the success in the world.

Ah nice to see this up and it looks like things have been shifted to the chronological order you've intended the shorts to be in?