Reviews for When It's All Over
northspear358 chapter 9 . 7/29
I found this story through the subreddit and boy am I glad that I did. Good writing quality, fluffy and heartwarming the entire way through, it's amazing to read. All the characters are in character, and the slang/language used are time appropriate. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Endeavor16 chapter 9 . 7/29
Ahh! This story just keeps getting better and better! This is my favorite chapter yet. I don’t know how you manage to keep all of their characters intact and yet still grow them and change them, but it is amazing. I can’t wait for more!
Endeavor16 chapter 8 . 7/28
This is so so good! I am so impressed by how you are handling each of the characters. You have written one of the few stories where I can actually hear the voice actors speaking when you write some dialogue! I cannot wait for more!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/27
Loved this chapter. Please keep em coming. I really liked the way Aang is dealing with his emotions.
BookishFlyingGecko chapter 8 . 7/27
Great chapter! Aang and Katara getting excited about the waterbending presentation is so cute. It's so nice to see how the gaang interact when they aren't in mortal danger or at a standstill. I wish I could see the coronation on screen, you do such a good job describing it.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/27
Nice
BookishFlyingGecko chapter 5 . 7/27
Don't apologize for not having romance; this is great! This chapter is the type of thing that would be too boring for younger kids to watch in the show, but enjoyable for older fans. I like how all your chapters are canon-compatible; it makes it seem like behind-the-scenes bonus content.
Siatrjdheusjhd chapter 7 . 7/26
When is the next part
richardsingar chapter 8 . 7/27
Amazing chapter! Love it.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/22
I loved the chapter. Keep me coming! I want to see more Kataang ️
chekovsgunman chapter 7 . 7/22
Ahh! Okay now THAT is a reunion.

I'm going to be a total cheat and piggy-back off of what ByMeForMe said - I really, really appreciate the human realism to Katara's inner thoughts. I always wondered if she and Aang had any kind of conversation about his tendency to, you know, fly away. Especially after the finale! I mean, she hadn't even seen Aang since he went to the lion turtle (which she did not even know happened), so they were all relying on sheer hope that he'd find Ozai and defeat him. Like - that combined with their back and forth romance? No wonder the poor girl might not feel a little confused! Don't get me wrong, I'm the biggest Aang fan on earth (don't fight me on this) but he definitely had his stumbles.

Already getting too long in this review, ahh! - 'Avatar Victory Tour' may be the most Sokka thing I've ever read. Absolutely love it! I'm going to wibble-wobble and complain that you did not spend as much time as I would have preferred (you know, an easy 50-60 chapters) on the reunion of the whole cast and maybe more one-on-one conversations. I'm greedy though! I'd love to have seen what Iroh would say to Aang after the twelve-year-old bald kid not only defeated his older brother, but also managed to take away his bending? For as spiritually attuned as Iroh is, I'm sure he'd be interested in a cup of tea and some late night discussion with the Avatar on energybending.

Too long again! Ahh - I can't wait for the next chapter. A quiet morning of Aang and Katara together? Yes please!
ByMeForMe chapter 7 . 7/22
Aw! That was a great reunion! I love the hesitation on Katara's part in the beginning, her feelings and thoughts about the war and it's effect on her, it really is more realistic in the world setting so I'm glad you did it that way! :)
Ashley Barbosa chapter 7 . 7/22
I'm here just to read Aang's part in all of this. Great job
obsessedwithATLA chapter 7 . 7/22
I’ve been reading A LOT of fan-fiction recently, and even though this is still a work in progress, it’s already one of my favorites. 10/10.
richardsingar chapter 7 . 7/22
Really good chapter! This story is becoming so popular
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