Interesting:)

You know you could write backstories of just about every being/thing in the Marvel/ DC universe and i'd read them in a heartbeat

This story is quite interesting! I dont think ive seen a lightning themed Jaune before and its quite interesting to read! I'm really looking forward to his and Nora's first meeting. :D

Ok, I’m really interested to see where this is going. However, I have one request. When Jaune meets Nora, and she sees him use Mjolnir, you have to have her say that she and Jaune are now Thunder Buddies for life.

Please be Nora's Arc, please be Nora's Arc, Please be Nora's Arc

plz let him beat Cardin into bloody pulp if he hurts Ruby and velvet,
would be nice to see him get along with Yatsu and fox since they must help Coco with her shopping murder spree would make a good gate way for friendship since as someone with multiple sister I too have an extreme fear of discount shopping with them

Has the makings of a good Oc story. Good luck. Hope to see more.

I seriously hope he won’t be overpowered. But on the upside, the history in this chapter was great!

I think this story is great and can't wait for more. I hope that you really show how Jaune gets to understand what happened and his acceptance and/or denial. Hope you also show how he is gojng to improve himself or how he already has.

Thank you for the great story. ye

MOAR! It's only been. 2 chapters and I already crave it! GIMME MOAR!

DC refrence?

Cool.

Oh I cannot wait to see where this goes. Wonderful beginning.

this is great! I kept getting chills the entire latter part of the story! You've got my attention. You only need to upload some more to keep it.

Sincerely,
A kaijudo Stalkersphere