Amazing power,... that they “sealed”

Boring.

If you are going to give ise a harem im instantly droping this. Right from the spot

honestly ... its always boring to read this kind of backstory .. its always and i mean ALWAYS the same as the other 100000 fanfics with this type of story ... well he watched his loved one dies buhu now we most be strong and become cold or maybe not the thing is its the same... you would have done much better if you just jumped to cannon and make flashbacks here and there

I bet Jackal is Imitheos but changed with a different name, or Jackal is his well known alias to hide his real name.

Extremely nasty MC. To whom he flaunts？ Why？ And his story also sucks. This is such a hackneyed cliche to write about a hero with a tragic childhood, whose uncle kills the whole family. Yes, I supposedly didn’t read dxd, but some kind of perverted and stupid version of the cartoon “The Lion King” or “Naruto”. Add more pathos, more stupid scenes, more stupid useless bitch masks and more characters from other animes. Come on, do it, make me cry with bloody tears.

Okay, I presume that Issei will still get his harem, which means that Asia will either still become a Devil, she is outright resurrected at the cost of someone else's life, or the ritual gets interrupted.

Good chapter, I want to see the next part.

I think that I'm going to hedge my suggestions for Issei's harem in this story until the harem list for Imitheos is revealed in its entirety simply because I don't want to unintentionally suggest a girl that is going to be in Imitheos' harem.

What a clinche shit... for real? Why wont you try being more original?

Try bring Lilith back, so much potential story writing wise and she's a succubus.

remove Kalawarner, Yubelluna and add rossweisse and ingveld

Thanks for the chapter and will be waiting for more chapters and who cares about issei he isn't the mc now so please don't focus oh him and don't make him a secondary mc, just make him a side character and try to take ddraig for yourself or someone important to the mc that's all, just a opinion of my.

Thanks for the awesome chapter.