A good start and I do hope this goes on as well as your other stories! BTW add Luna to the Mix in Harry & Hermione's second year. she a great character that can stir things up and be a catalyst too!

dennisud

This is brilliantly written. It’s a joy to read a logical, heart warming, H/Hr.

I love how you describe things, like neville looking like he wants to swallow Ron's second suggestion.

i love all my little lions and harry's replicas were very smart.

harry explaining hermione why she shouldn't get involved was interesting, and it worked a little on one of her attitudes.

and hermione being able to relax a little is very nice, not just studying.

I think it's really good that Neville and Ron are best friends.
I'ts very interesting

magnificent

the changes you made were very interesting

and harry's response to malfoy was brilliant

hermione defending harry and harry encouraging hermione makes me smile.

and she talking about the little mistake at the end made me snort with laughter. the girl's attitude.

she really wants to help, but she is very frank and can seem rude, lol. but social skills can be difficult

Hermione exasperated, bossy, but also kind and cute. great performance and it was also fun.

harry convincing himself not to care about others makes me smile. and he introducing her to hagrid still has this beautiful thing of childhood and innocence. makes me truly happy.

they are concerned with the classification, lmao. "it is today that I am concerned"

"that hat is filthy". omg, hilarious

harry fighting with the hat, lmao.

I wonder if the power reading was horcrux.

you spoke well about hermione's characteristics that can be a little irritating to others.

both are so cute. incredible story

eleven year old harry is so lost and kind. I wanted to deliver the moon to him

his thought about the chocolate frog, lmao. I love him

And the way Harry talks about the closet, it breaks my heart.
but the way he says it is so smart because that has always been normal for harry. and he is still a child

these two are so cute. I'm already in love with this story. I love how the meeting happened and their conversation

"you're almost like me then, growing up as a muggle."

Whether Hermione or another muggleborn or halfblood who knows the muggle world.
I've thought it oddly rare, to see that commonality exploited, even among numerous "Harmony" genre (particularly in terms of a friendship or shipping ship(ie. pairing) ).

Mischief Managed!
very well indeed

Ok so, first thing i want to say is PLEASE DONT MAKE THIS THE SAME AS YOUR OTHER FICS!
-Don't take material from your old stories
-Don't emancipate Harry
-Don't give Harry private quarters
-Make it harder for Sirius' exoneration
-Don't get Tonks to guard them!
-Don't give Harry some type of insane ability (like the ultracharged Patroni in MiL and DB)
-Overall just make things harder for him! Please! It makes the story more interesting.

xxxx Kudos xxxx : )

nice well done

I enjoyed the banter between Harry and Draco. He’s so smug and talks big game all the time, it’s great that this version of Harry knows how to push his buttons AND avoid being impulsive.

Too bad about Ron and Neville losing points but why did the twins talk Ron into it?

Good four chapters

Yum! at the thought of that shepherd's pie Harry is eating.
And the roast chicken and potatoes Hermione is eating.
I love the way Harry and Hermione just double teamed Draco Malfoy.

wicked thanks stay safe