interesting

Hey can freddy stay unique like as in the only one of him, if there were more it wouldn't be no where near as interesting, and just keep curses as curses from now on or it would be way to out there and forced.

If anything I DON'T want the mc to be worn down over time and actually continue to increasingly stand up for himself because if he doesn't she will continue to treat him like a pet with no free will if only marginally better than the rest. Esdeath might be best girl but he shouldn't become a dog that only barks when he is told that is NOT a relationship.

On another note I don't like fredrick anymore he has shown himself to be smart enough to realise what is going on and has known the mc long enough to know the situation is wrong but it seems he has absolutely no loyalty to the mc at all. The idea of him being "Naive about humans" doesn't work with his words and actions. I mean the mc literally calls him a TRAITOR to his face a word he clearly understands yet he continues to be subservient to the woman that's keeping his creator captive and then gives away the mc's stuff without permission

With his intelligence and understanding of his own naivety it would have been more natural for him to double check with the mc before anything else was said or done nothing was gained with this over than a forced situation of fredrick becoming a traitor. The mc would have had to explain being a nevermore anyways along with some of his abilities they have a basic understanding of which would leads to questions of how fredrick was made to if he had other similar thing which would have lead to the mc doing the testing instead of fredrick because of his new understanding of his own race in an attempt to gain xp from kills of people he didn't care about and this leads to a Discovery that with the people who resisted instead of getting alot at once like with those who died he gets a very minor amount of exp over time from them leading to him allowing them to kept by the soldiers. This would have felt a lot more natural and wouldn't have lead to me hating fredrick personally.

But this is probably going to end up exactly like those "Abuse" Fanfictions where he eventually forgives fredrick. Betrayal of any kind intentional or not should be taken seriously as it shows the potential for it to happen again even if the character "grows".

Other than that great story with fresh abilities for the mc in a genre filled with "FiRe Is tHe sTrOnGeSt, sPaM iT."

Hey, you good? Just wondering and wishing you the best

can't wait for the next chapter

raven.
dont stick your dick in the crazy.
hell, cut it off even.

Going good keep it up

Frederick best stone boi

Really enjoying this story, especially Fredericks mindset regarding humans as a whole. Looking forward to seeing more of this story.

Pick either Shukketsu or Foreshadow

God I’m loving Raven’s character already! I love that you’re showing Esdeath’s POV, I love reading what she thinks about Raven. I ship them already!

I hope Raven's end game fighting style is like neo's from rwby with the whole mirror thing going on.

I really like Shukketsu, The Grudge and Poe. They both sound dope and could be good for his fighting style. So why not both lol. Good shit do far Freddy is probably my favorite so far.

I need more chapters

Is he a midget?