Enjoyable chapter

Liked Team Arrow taking down the members of Tempest

Ah nice for getting a jump start early on taking down Slade and his other trio of villains.

Like Laurel, Thea and Sara reassuring Oliver that what happen with Slade is not his fault.

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Enjoyable chapter

Ah so Sara and Laurel decide to bring in Barbara Gordon to help them out, yeah way better choice than Felcity.

Like that Team Arrow is starting to train Roy to

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Why would this Chapter Upset people? I have an idea, but I just wanted confirmation. I'm thinking that it's because Felicity is out of the team which is great.

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Nah your fine, doesn't upset me at all for Diggle and now Felcity getting kicked off the team. They need to be since you listed just some of the reasons why in the very long run they did more harm than good and are not Oliver's family or have his back at all.

Yeah nice to see Oliver and Sara have the understanding that sometimes the only way to deal with the threat is to kill them to make sure they stay dead. Like Oliver said it's a necessary evil.

Onto the guest can you Olicty please go take a hike somewhere else, instead of trashing the author. You people have got countless Olicty fics to read and even those where Sara's a evil person, go read those. Leave the authors trying to bring something different alone.

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I can't stand Sara in this story at all I can't stand Sara with Oliver at all I can't believe they made felicity leave just because she doesn't want Oliver to kill anymore but the bitch Sara does also that they made diggle quit too

isn't this breaking up the arrow team though hopefully you don't have anybody else leave

Nope. It doesn't offend at all. Actually someone needs to point it out that harsh measures are required. We saw in the show that count escaped prison and continued his work. Two prison breaks, (if you don't count the one that occurred due to undertaking) one when Oliver was presumed dead in S03 and when Damien shark escaped in S04, just back to square one.

Put them in prison once, I understand but if they escape again, put them down permanently. Because after some time, the responsibility of innocent lives lost due to criminal/villain's actions comes on the person who doesn't do what needs to be done. I dislike those who value taking high road more important than saving lives.

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While it was an intense chapter, I'd liked it. There were certain people I'd saw on Social Media who never liked Felicity & never like her being with Oliver. I'd had no problem with it but a lot of people did but I'd only watched half of the show cause I'd wasn't watching the 1st four seasons of the show.

I didn't see that coming

Enjoyable chapter

Like Oliver, Sara, Laurel and Thea all helping take on the assassin

Tommy well took it better than in canon, that's good at least

Good bye to Diggle I shall not be sad to see him leave the team early after what he became in the show and Diggle ticked me off in the Home Invasion episode anyway.

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Great story

hmm Oliver for mayor maybe or his mom

for the love of god please don't have everybody join the team, feel like you don't have to do that with both Oliver and Sara out in the field. other then that, still enjoying the story so far

wanna tell you here and now how hype I am for this story there is not enough oliver/Sara or Oliver/laurel stories and they always fun because both girls are way better for Oliver.

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An Oliver/Sara pairing from you? Very nice and well always glad to see more Oliver/Sara, they are my main OTP for them both.

Sara going back in time to start fixing things after having had enough with Oliver's death totally fits her character.

Ah wow talk about an info drop Sara has been giving out these past few days.

Good riddance to Malcolm Merlyn you shall not be missed and Sara is indeed keeping him from causing alot of people alot of pain.

Laurel's on her way to being Black Canary for the start, well at least this time around she will have better training.

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