I love the "first time experiencing sorrow or guilt" part. It kinda reminded me of ToA, with the whole 'god getting adjusted to mortal life' thing. (I'm not in any way trying to imply that you're plot stealing, this is a pretty unique story)
Also, if this quote isn't in the book it needs to be: “Hey, I resent that! Tin Cans are, if fact, very nutritious and high in many valuable minerals! Not that we’ll find any out here, it seems like this is the one unpolluted river in America...”
Also: COACH HEDGE REFERENCE ALERT

I LOVE YOUR STORY WAY TOO MUCH FOR IT TO BE HEALTHY

This was a really good chapter! Annabeth gets more character development, and obviously, gets much closer to Percy.

I'll admit, I was expecting her to hide her former status from Percy, but I think the way you took things will actually work out better in the long run story-wise, and prevent some of the more stretched out story beats that say, unOrdinary has.

Also, yes Annabeth, I too find time cans disgusting.

"a melding of minds between a mortal woman and my mother" This was probably a mistake, but it got me thinking. If children of Athena are born through thought, then technically it could be possible for Athena to have a child with a woman, right? Or am I just being crazy?
Great chapter Geo, keep up the good work!

Percy seems so forgiving and understanding for someone who hasn’t done anything for him besides watch his mother die. Seems kinda odd to have him be so accepting of anything Annabeth says

Yes! The poodle!
Awesome writing as always, great backstory stuffs, and of course, wonderful Medusa scene. But the best part by far is the pink poodle, which is saying something because you haven’t even written it yet.

Uhh this chapter seems a bit out of continuity
Was that a mistake? Or did you put in another fic's chapter in this by mistake?

Harmonica did it, for Casmus. So I don’t see why Annabeth can’t. Good story and a creative one at that. I'll be looking into this.

The premise is okay, sort of interesting? But the grammar and spelling is kind of off-putting. Maybe you should get a beta or read over your work before posting, as there are many grammatical mistakes and spelling errors. The writing is choppy at times and doesn't really flow nicely, but the plot is decent, so keep up the nice work?

"I could imagine the pure terror in his eyes before a dozen arrows imbedded themselves into Percy's body before it dissolved into dust."

Didn't know Perccy's a monster.

20 drachma*
“Killer quest” musical reference?
This chapter was fun plot-wise, but a bit hard to read grammar-wise. Seemed hastily written, but I still can’t wait for the next one :)
Keep up the good work!

smitten (insert Maui face here) smote, smoten ah whatever.

Huh... malcom, Luke, and Thalia. Interesting choice. Also, hothead? Love it. It suits the ‘new’ Annabeth.

Cuteeeee. Goddess!Annabeth is such a great AU. I’m sure you just started an entire AU category and sparked new fanfics.

Reddit brought me here, and I’m entirely glad it did! I have yet to read through this chapter, but I already love the premise. I whole-heartedly support your writing!

Hmmm... I wonder how the Annabeth/Luke/Thalia thing is going to play out, since they don't have any history together.