I love Roseluck she's so cute!

This second chapter is well-written, a good continuation to the story.

Roseluck's presence when Hazel and Fiver go see the Threarah is handled well, especially with her thoughts on the conversation throughout the scene. There are some more cute scenes between her and Bigwig, especially when he tells her that he intends to leave too. The nuzzling scene with Fiver was also cute; their relationship seems to be progressing nicely.

The group who ends up leaving the warren consists of virtually everyone from the original book, minus Bluebell and Speedwell. There is also the addition of Violet, who will hopefully lead a longer life than in the 1978 film. I like what you did with Silver. Also, it seems like Buckthorn may have an expanded role, with his one-side crush on Roseluck; this is going to be interesting, especially considering her growing relationship with Fiver. A bit disappointed Wilderry didn't appear to have joined them though; her one short scene seemed interesting.

Looking forward to more!

- Nice start to your story. I kinda like this Roseluck doe for being Bigwig's sister and being in much better terms with the outskirter rabbits than the rest of the Owsla, who do not seem to treat Roseluck any better than what they do with outskirters.

- Bigwig's personality is way different compared to the book's and miniseries, so I wonder is he in this story more of like he is in the book and 1978 film or does he still has his "temper-issues" with the Hazel and Fiver like he has in the miniseries.

- Yahoo! Pipkin is gonna be in! It was a bit of a pity that he wasn't in the miniseries.

- One question: Is Roseluck gonna be the only doe of Hazel and Fiver's group when they leave Sandleford? There wasn't any does who left with Hazel's group in the book and miniseries (save for Violet in 1978 film and Blackberry the doe in TV-series). I'm pretty sure you're gonna keep Blackberry as a buck in this story but it would've be nice if there's another doe in the group than just Roseluck.

Nice to see a new writer to the WD section!

I approve of your decision to combine the various versions. Pipkin's absence was one of my least favourite aspects of the miniseries, so it's nice to see he'll be here. Hopefully Silver too. The name change of your OC from Primrose to Roseluck also seems like a good choice.

The chapter begins the day before the miniseries, with a pretty cute scene between Bigwig and Roseluck. Their interactions reveal a softer side to Bigwig that we will hopefully see more of. You also do a good job at describing the various situations and locations they encounter along their way to the farm.

Once back at the warren, Roseluck meets Hazel, and later on Fiver. Based on the summary, Roseluck and Fiver will become a couple later on. So far, we get a few hints of the possible future relationship; the two are pretty cute in their interactions.

The next day, the first few scenes of the miniseries unfold, but with Roseluck following Hazel and Fiver around. She fits in mostly well in the situation, notably with Dewdrop and the sow thistle incident. At the end of the chapter, she says that she will help the brothers with meeting the Threarah. It's going to be interesting to see how this unfolds. Looking forward to more!