Update!

Pretty good, just needs to be continued that's all.
10/11

I like how you're just jumping straight into the plot. I also like the idea of the Champions in Link's head. Leads to some really cute banter. :)

And now you've made me hungry...

That mid bit was humorous :) I can imagine Link having a tough time coping with the aftereffects of the Calamity, and I'm down for seeing where the Champion voices in Link's head take him. I think I'll be... -haunting-