For the record dropping the f and replacing it with ph does not make you sound smart, it only makes you look like you’re terrible at spelling. Also trying to sound smart by using high school vocabulary words that no one has heard of makes the story uninteresting and difficult to read. Plus when a person writes “good comments only”, they’re basically begging for good comments.

More accurate word count: 3,521

I am Christian and have to say this. Believing in God doesn't make you a good person. There are people serving time in prison right now that believe in God. There are even crips and bloods and other gang members that believe in God and look at them...

And you DO NOT DESERVE GOOD REVIEWS LIKE YOU SAID IN THE SUMMARY. YOU DESERVE THE OPPOSITE. YOU STEAL STORIES AND STALK AND GROPE WOMEN AND LIE. DO NOT EVER SAY YOU DESERVE GOOD THINGS LIKE THAT WHEN YOU MAKE NO EFFORT TO BECOME A BETTER PERSON AND HAVE DONE THOSE THINGS.

You are horrible.

Everything people say about you is true.

You suck.

Uh... yeah.

Meh

4:26 pm

Started off good but confused towards the end.