This is a great story CelestialCake! What is the different memory? You HAVE to tell us in the next chapter. Thanks!

Oh my goodness! Very excited to see where this goes! If I had one suggestion, it would be to break up that first big paragraph. This is a very good story, but I'll admit I was a little turned off on mobile when I saw that first big block of text. All around though, the formatting and story is very good! Please keep writing!