Can you PM me because I would like to talk to you about one of your stories.

Nioce

Unfortunately it is another fic of the type betrayal and change of life.

When a girl does that, you have to say: "Hey, your butt has a life of its own as it moves like an exotic dancer."
Where is the female pride in that?

Bye.

As long as Gumball doesn't behave as stupid in front of a girl as it happens in "Einherjar Pagan" and maintains his somewhat sarcastic personality as in the series without so much OOC; I'll keep reading your story.

bye

Great job

Wow this is an interesting start of a good story and I hope to see more. I feel bad for Gumball but at least there’s still people that like him and he’s making new friends and maybe a new love interest wink wink. Though is Gumball gonna be a ninja or an archeologist like the title said? Is there gonna be. A flash back to what happen at Gumball’s old school? Also I think Nicole should be punished by having her parents disowned her.