interesting... I like ur oc. I think if I was in that situation my resolve would be 1 let uzushio be destroyed and salvage all the scrolls as possible or 2 dethrone the main line and be uzukage and kill the traitors.

Will Indra have a summons scroll? Would be awesome if he was some animal type Sage.

Idk, I really like the way you think and describe things. But I dislike the parts where you write in 3rd person.

meh good start but overused plot (tragic infancy and all that). i just did not understand if in the beginning he did not have hes memoryes or just tried to ignore all the signs of where he was

I think you should change Indra's name. It would be known that Indra was a main branch Uzumaki child, am outliers he might be. If he wishes to go under the radar, so as to speak, a new name is required. How about Minato? (xD)
Coz it really does not make sense for him to retain the same name after having a hit put out against his family. So, Revenge against the Uzumaki and Kiri?

grammar sucks

Nice idea for a story. As you said you are new to writing (which is awesome) I'll tell you some things that as a reader I did not like.
1- sometimes there is too much info dump
2- dialogues sometimes feel forced and again they give too much info dump. Like the kiri shinobi ranting everything out of nowhere.
3- sometimes you are reiterative. More words not always means better.
Those are some things I noticed; but to be honest there was improvement from chapter one to chapter two. So, congrats on that.
Keep at it. Hope you keep updating.
have a nice day.

This is a very promising story, however there are many promising si fanfics out there but rarely do any of them reach any sort of finish or even 100k words. I am not holding my breath but I am hopeful for where you will take this adventure.

Why explain about the history. Everyone knows that. It increased the word count unnecessarily

I wonder if he could mix the reincarnation technic from tobirama with fetus in vitro made from his family cells?

What about his eyebrows? They are red also, right?

very interesting

Nice start so far. Hope you'll keep the updates comming.

okyish?

Needs a serious beta reader. I kinda lost interest when I saw the mother was 5 feet "long".

:D