| Reviews for When Red Met Orange |
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BlueShard20 chapter 2 . 6/10 I'm liking this story so far. Keep it up! |
AlucardsBro chapter 2 . 6/1 Hey guys. I know some of you may be anxious for this story to continue, but I am currently taking some personal time to tend to my own mental health. The world is in a pretty damn state right now. See you all in a week or two! |
Wsss chapter 1 . 6/1 Is this story dead please keep updating it's pretty good! |
Chronosign chapter 2 . 5/27 I hope Pyrrha falls for Ichigo and he notices her feelings unlike a certain dumb blonde. |
Chronosign chapter 1 . 5/27 Very good first chapter, going to be reading lots more of this. |
narutocrazy101 chapter 2 . 5/21 Only one word can describe what I think of this story... HOOKED! |
ShadowWarriorOmega chapter 2 . 5/20 Hey, just found this. Good work. Looking forward to more! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16 This story has a lot of potential (considering I've only seen a few Pyrrha-centric CROSSOVER fanfics) But considering your past history of leaving your stories when they get to the interesting parts I wouldn't get my hopes up just yet(no hate btw). Sorry if it sounds like hate. People who are saying Pyrrha is 6ft...Yeah it's true BUT she's wearing 4" heels so she's actually 5 foot 8. -Some Random Asshole |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/15 Please update. Can't wait for more |
KenDman chapter 1 . 5/15 What a Good story here mate! pls continue it. oh and by the way Phyrras height is said to be 6ft tall WITH HEALS! so shes probably around 5'9"/5'10 while Ichigos Heigh is 5'11" |
808Joker808 chapter 2 . 5/11 Good stuff so far |
SomethingAncient chapter 2 . 5/6 Oh, wow, they were so casual about giving Ichigo's room away, so I figured Ichigo had moved out (since later on, when Rukia stays at the Kurosaki residence a second time, she is given one of the twin's beds and the twins sleep together, and Ichigo keeps his room)... it turns out I was wrong. That said, I do appreciate you clarifying when this is all taking place. Thanks. |
SomethingAncient chapter 1 . 5/6 Hey, this is a great first chapter; it really set the stage well. The transition was interesting, and done in a way I don't see too often. And while a bit serendipitous, Pyrrha running into the Urahara shop is completely plausible. And speaking of Kisuke, you did justice to him. It was a breath of fresh air to see his intelligence decide his actions, and not just be branded the stereotypical perverted, manic, genius-on-occasion I've seen so many do. You did well with his characterization, as well as his keen perception. Pyrrha going to the library makes sense, and better yet, it wasn't used to figure out everything about everything, like I've seen some fics do, so that was nice. I'm curious as to how she found out about ancient Greece, but it's not impossible I suppose. I think her dialogue could use a tiny bit of work in one or two small areas, but it's solid for the most part. ("That is very interesting, but it still does not explain why I am here," read a little awkward to me. Maybe if she said something like "I see... still, why am I here?" It doesn't have to be exactly that, I'm just trying to offer an example in the hope that you understand the gist of what I'm getting at.) It's interesting that you've chosen to set this story after Ichigo moves out, and I think that's great. As a side note, I'm surprised that Yuzu didn't protest using Ichigo's old room, but that's a very minor thing. Isshin saying 3rd daughter and not 4th daughter... I'm not going to say that's wrong, but would it be too much to ask why Rukia's former title was reused? I'm just curious. Thanks for the chapter, and the new story, and the time and effort you put into it. And I'll agree with your opinion of Rooster Teeth. It really is a shame Monty Oum died before he could finish RWBY... and at such a young age, too. |
Drunken Sarge chapter 2 . 5/5 Dragonlord001 beat me to it. Pyrrha is six feet tall, broad shouldered, and with a sizeable bust...that t-shirt is going to be anything but too big for her |
Andromeda chapter 2 . 5/5 It's so good to see a crossover with Pyrrha. I'm excited when Toshiro and the others appear and maybe meet Pyrrha |