Reviews for The Surface Breaks
Aya Diefair chapter 2 . 5/21
This was an adorable little drabble. I really enjoyed Astoria in this. I'd always liked the fact that Draco probably did annoy her a tiny bit, but felt like she was tough enough to dish it all back as well. This is a little glimmer to to, and I really enjoyed your characterization of both of them.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/16
I was crying when reading Astoria's death'…but both endings are excellent!
Guest chapter 21 . 5/16
Adding to the last review: Don't get me wrong, I liked your writing style and everything was really good, I just don't like reading Drastoria related to the Cursed Child. Keep writing!
Guest chapter 21 . 5/16
That was beautiful. Generally, I avoid reading anything related to the Cursed Child, because I don't like seeing Astoria dying and Draco being a widow. I loved the portrayal of their relationship. The chapter in which Draco realized that their marriage was anything but loveless was probably my favourite, along with the second epilogue. A big thank you for that last one, both to you and your mom :d It was the reason I kept reading!
Guest chapter 13 . 5/13
So sweet! But maybe Astoria could buy the fork instead of stealing it :D
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29
They are such an adorable couple! I love the fun they have, even from the very beginning. You've written it well, and I can't wait to read more! Are you going to include Cursed Child in this? I hope not, but it's definitely up to you. Keep up the good work!