It has a lot of potential... but since I know a lot... feel free to ask me any questions.

The idea is interesting its just that this chapter was too fast paced for me i felt like i was reading a crack fic.

Esta muy bueno la historia se ve interesante como le irá a Frank en el universo stargate con el Omnitrix será bueno si usa el de electricidad para restaurar la energía del zpm de la ciudad así tengan más energía como ayudará ahora en ese universo

Nice start

Okay, the only problem with this story is that it's not planned well. You can't just say that you got dropped into the universe of Stargate and next thing you do is tell everyone that they are in a show and expect them to believe that quick.
I'm sorry to say this even though you good hate me

This story is trash

I like where this is going on, it has alot of potential since some Self Inserts stories are trash this one has a different feeling to it which is good by the way.
Don't drop the story any time soon or I'll haunt you.

Thanks and update please!

Awesome intro.
Looking forward to more.

Wonder when will Frank use Grey Matter to find a way to create or recharge ZPMs.
Also, wonder if with him there the experiment with Michael might be stable, heck maybe the Hoffan Drug could be perfected to not have any side effects.