Oh fuuuuuuuuuck! Ooooh! Fury’s reaction at the end was awesome! That’s how the two times Hero Of Olympus should be treated! I quackin loved this.
I’d ask for more, but I feel like this masterpiece is good as is.
Although I was kinda confused on all the POV changes and scene changes. Give us a line break so we don’t have to wonder when so-in-so suddenly just got his pants ripped off and wonder where the frick it came from. (Just an example.)

Nice, dude. Nice.

I know this is a one shot but I want more...
no oath and all of a sudden you got a story start

Cool!

Ok I know this is a one shot but it would be really cool if you continued it

Wow, pretty interesting starting point! I hope that you decide to continue this story, I think it'd be amazing.

My favorite Percy is an OP Percy

Im going to be totally selfish and ask for more

This is really good. I’m hoping to see more of this.

I love this, it's really good!

That's some good stuff.

That's quite a cool start. You really should try to continue with it. I think it would become quite a popular fanfic

This is a good one shot. I suggest that you might continue it cause it got me hooked.