| Reviews for Total Eclipse |
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foxee-chik chapter 5 . 6/26 Wow! Keep goin! I liked it! I can't w8 2 read the nxt chap! I liked the prev chaps as well |
studley24 chapter 3 . 6/17 Enjoyed this so far, will enjoy if you do expand upon them. Re: Hermione’s ethnicity, PoA has 2 mentions that hint toward her being caucasian. The first is when the duo (H & H) plus one find each other in the Alley the day before they go to the express:- “Harry woke on the last day of the holidays, thinking that he would at least meet Ron and Hermione tomorrow, on the Hogwarts Express. He got up, dressed, went for a last look at the Firebolt, and was just wondering where he’d have lunch, when someone yelled his name and he turned. ‘Harry! HARRY!’ They were there, both of them, sitting outside Florean Fortescue’s Ice-Cream Parlour, Ron looking incredibly freckly, Hermione very brown, both waving frantically at him” * The second (and key one I think) is when H & H Time Turn near end of book, while getting Buckbeak from the front of Hagrid’s hut:- “Harry tugged harder on the rope around Buckbeak’s neck. The Hippogriff began to walk, rustling its wings irritably. They were still ten feet away from the Forest, in plain view of Hagrid’s back door. ‘One moment, please, Macnair,’ came Dumbledore’s voice. ‘You need to sign, too.’ The footsteps stopped. Harry heaved on the rope. Buckbeak snapped his beak and walked a little faster. Hermione’s white face was sticking out from behind a tree. ‘Harry, hurry!’ she mouthed.” * * Excerpts From Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban J.K. Rowling This material may be protected by copyright. |
Bubblezmith chapter 5 . 6/14 :) |
Kyle chapter 5 . 6/11 Are you going to have Harry have his mother's side checked? |
ThunderClaw03 chapter 5 . 6/12 Hermione is the Royal of the wizarding world. Update soon |
Yaw613 chapter 5 . 6/11 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
locojoe4 chapter 5 . 6/11 You've got a good story, however you might want to go over the chapter, there seems to be a lot of grammar errors. There's even one point where Rita calls Hermione Mrs Weasley. Fix up the chapter, and it'll be another good addition to this story. |
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 5/17 Minus the random lyrics, this story was pretty good. why didn’t Daphne ask Hermione to the dance instead of waiting for Hermione to ask? |
Araytigre chapter 4 . 5/12 This is going to be another fun one to be sure. It will be interesting to see what kind of Bond that they have, obviously powerful enough to block a Marriage Contract. It will be fun to see the reply that Daphne gets from the Goblins, and the results when Hermione checks to see about the possible Dagworth-Granger inheritance. Can't wait to see what she does to Ron, lol. Thank You. TTFN |
General Mac chapter 4 . 4/30 Wicked thanks stay safe |
Thundramon chapter 4 . 4/29 who came up with the idea becoming Animagus to help me James and Remus had become animagi to get Pettigrew to gain his. After that point, we started hanging Sirius being a stag and dog respectively Petter was a rat Made some errors up there, just pointed them out for quick fixing |
Yaw6113 chapter 4 . 4/29 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot. |
General Mac chapter 3 . 4/29 Brilliant thanks love it, stay well and safe. |
Yaw6113 chapter 3 . 4/29 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
Bubblezmith chapter 3 . 4/29 Yowtch, need to work that spell checker a bit. played not plaid. |