well shit he's still alive. sad that this was such a short chapter but I'm glad it's still going

Hello, Andromeda2050! I love the premise, and how more about Lyn is introduced with each course of action she takes (the motorcycle, Avalanche, Marle, Bigg's girl). It's really interesting! I like her so far - she seems like a reasonable sort, and I wonder what sort of trouble she'd get up to if she were part of this scene.

Regards,
Anne

Awe I loved this chapter! I’m seriously so enjoying seeing Dovelyn go around and revisit all of her Avalanche friends and especially Biggs, poor man deserves more love. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

keep up the good work! I'm curious on how she'll handle the plate falling

I’m really enjoying these chapters! They’re really good and you’re nailing everyone’s personalities perfectly. It’s going to be really interesting to see what happens with the next reactor mission and what comes from it.

the trio sure like to give her anxiety x_x

Oh, that interaction was so heart-wrenching! I hope that their relationship slowly but surely mends in the future. And damn - those scenes of her fighting the Gorgers were ; she sounds so skilled and agile and fast (despite getting stung in the process), it's awesome! I'd love to see more of her in action again! As well as how she'll tie in with the game story plot.

Looking good! I can't wait to see what Dovelyn's skill set is, as well as seeing moments of her and Biggs together when they eventually meet up again. Keep up the good work!

Ohhhhh Biggs saves her! It’s so interesting to catch a glimpse of the two of them together and see that they really do still care for each other despite what happened.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

can't wait for when the actions starts to pick up, especially when Shinra decides to drop the plate

There’s some good bones to this story so far! I’m very excited to see where it goes and how Lyn plays into it all. I’m fairly close to beating FVIIR and I’m super excited to see where you take this story and these characters!

2 things:
1. Sorry for posting two reviews, I posted the first one and when I went back to this story, it wasn't there. And now both reviews are showing. This happens sometimes.
2. I'm currently checking back in to this story, and before I clicked on it to read it, it said that it updated, but when I actually clicked on the story to read it, there was only one chapter, not two...what it up with that?

Brilliant! I've been looking for a Biggs x OC fic, and I can't wait to see another chapter of this one!

Now, I'm no video-gamer, but I've seen the footage of FFVII Remake, and I'm immediately in love with Biggs, especially when he's voiced by none other than Gideon Emery, aka voice of Balthier in FFXII as well as Fenris in Dragon Age 2, and he's (Biggs) handsome too.
I'm so eager for a Biggs x OC fan-fic - I know that the summery says that your OC is "intrigued with Cloud", but will there be any sparks between her and Biggs as well, at all? - Can't wait to see what you have in store for this story!

Nice start I want to see where this story goes so update soon