whoa, it seems i always missed out on some hidden gems- great story with low acknowledgment-, whenever i searched for one. yours is one in the making, a truly splendid one with great future ahead. i'd wonder if the princess would be rescuable by Naruto, or would the capture of her would thicken the plot of the story.

definitely a unique story-cant wait to read more. i've seen my share of naruto ghost stories, but this hits the M rating to the core, lol. very nice.

where fuck are you are where the fuck are those updates you bitch

Holy shit did sarutobi aprove that mission in the end. I dont really see naruto manipulating people like that even if he be seeing ghost shit his whole life, this mans will is suppose to be to strong to turn into a dick like that but i get it after that last part.

So is Jaguar the old cook Chef Ninja guy that's trained under the Second Hokage but decided to stay again Dean because he failed

Great story so far, keep up the incredible work!

I like how Naruto can't realy control the ghost upsorbation, what he see and "learn", woud be funny if he could use a jutsu from the ghost and it saves his ass and he is like wtf just happen.
I enjoyed the short fight and the AU element.
The itachi manipulation was gold, hope she hit him for it. Looking forward for more.
Have a great one
Barny

So Naruto is manipulating fem itachi? Hopefully that won't turn into a seduction later on...
Oh right almost forgot that he is younger than her younger sibling...

Love the story, Jaguar is a very mysterious character!

Thouroughly enjoying this, keep up the good work! Its a nice change of pace to the stereotypical 'save them from them self' that you see more often

Good work.

Oof, those training omakes are harsh

great book love it

I like how you throw in the details like the little manipulation Naruto uses on Weasel. It helped to immerse me that much more. Also the show not tell method of writing is helping with immersion too.

Lesson #3 is pretty heart rending, you are quite the mind-fucker at times.

Anyway thank you for another update

Ooh, certainly it is very well written. And as much as I'll reserve judgement, for now, it seems inspired.

Best writing to you,

I love the story, but I do have some hangups. The way Naruto acts in this chapter is extremely unrepresentative of a kid who was put through an intensified ANBU training at 5. He, I'm sorry to say, acts unprofessional in the face of teasing or being flashed a little? Also, you had Sarutobi ask if Jaguar got inappropriate with him, and Naruto got extremely flustered by the mere idea of sexual anything. Yet, in this same chapter, you had Ghost mention that he poured hot sauce into his urethra? I'm sorry, and I hope I'm not being a flame. But, there just teems to be a huge dichotomy between his training and his mentality. Also, why did he have to take his mask off? That also seems out of place.