You say one girl per Danny but he can duplicate himself
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I love this so far

My thoughts on the romance aspect is: don't worry about it. I don't think it needs to be the main focus of this story. I've seen a lot af fanfics that start off strong, then the romance becomes the central moving force to the story. In MHA, they barely even hint at romance (which would be the other extreme) and instead focus on fighting. For Danny, I think you can find a perfect balance between both genres that is more true to life. So in regards for deciding on who to pair him with, just find someone you can imagine him having good interactions with and be a supporting character, not just an object for the main character to obsess over.

hmm let's see where this goes

Me gusta como va todo la verdad,y siendo honesto me gustaría que terminara en la clase 1-B ya que creo que se llevaría mejor con los personajes de allí. Además de lo más importante que espero es que no haga que el Don de Aizawa afecte a los poderes de Danny por qué al final lo que el tiene NO es un Quirk y el hecho de que nerf a Danny de esa manera me da a entender que soy escritores por lo menos perezosos que no intenta lograr superar ese recto,además de que no hay nesesidad de inflar los poderes de Danny metiendo unos nuevos teniendo en cuenta que el es una fuerza a tener en cuenta ya tal como es.

If I may be able to provide a friendly suggestion: lay off on introducing new powers until further down the line. Danny pretty much has story-breaker powers already and adding those in at the current moment will remove some tension from within the story. I’d hate to see this fic devolve into a power trip. So save those for when Izuku develops Blackwhip, cause’ that will be around the time the baddies will start to become even bigger and badder. Spoilers for those who don’t know, Blackwhip is one of several quirks contained within One-for-All that Izuku will gain access to in the future. One of the other ones being Float, the quirk of Nana Shimura.

If you feel like your out of depth, then maybe you should consider collaborating with a co-writer. I’d really hate to see this story discontinued because you’ve hit a block in the road. Script your writing several arcs in advance. That’s about as much I can tell you. Take care.

This story actually looks very promising. The few DP x MHA fics around are typically beneath notice. Most tend to have Danny’s powers, abilities derived from the ectoplasm baked into his DNA, be rendered inert by Aizawa’s Erasure. I can understand not wanting to write around that particular issue, but that just screams lazy writing to me. So I’m curious of to your approach to the matter. Also, may I consider the girls of Class 1-B for the pairing? I mean, one of them possesses a ghost-like quirk. So there can definitely be mild attraction between the two of them. Ciao.

On the couple of Danny my votes would be Kyoka Jiro: she has a certain resemblance to Sam either by appearance or musical taste, although she is not as gothic as Sam, Pony Tsunotori: a shy, naive and innocent girl, in addition to not having much knowledge of Japan, it would not be a bad option to be Danny's first friend, both could be good friends until they became a couple, Itsuka Kendou: a girl who is always willing to take care of and help her friends and colleagues in any situation , she could be a good company and friendship for Danny so he can keep moving forward.

I like the direction that this story is going. I do have to wonder how Danny will interact with the MHA world.

For Izuku of course pairing should be Izuku x Uraraka because this is the way. But for Danny I don't think you should go for the generic ones like Momo or Tsuyu or Mina. Because they are just overused and frankly a little boring. So what I was thinking was what about Pony? Think about it she's American so she can connect with Danny in this different culture and she isn't used very often. There relationship would be new and refreshing to the fandom. Just give it some thought! (This is the pairing I'm trying out in my own story and so far it has been really easy to right and just seems to work!)

Definitely a fun chapter, and it’s nice to see how things are shaping up!

The power loss is an interesting way to even the playing field with Danny and the other students. Looking forward to seeing how everything plays out!

Right when I rediscover this story and wonder when a new chapter is coming, a wild chapter appears! Great seeing Danny's mindset after all that's happened to him. Glad to see he isn't immediately all better but he isn't an overly depressed mess. Love how is new guardian is basically Darwin from X-Men. I'm guessing the block to Danny's powers is a mental one due to his indecision and trauma from loosing his family. I wonder who he'll meet next and if and when he'll make the leap to becoming a hero?

I think everyone has had that wish at some points in their life, to make the pain go away; it’s nothing physical but more like the torment in our mind, yet we treat it as if our heart is in critical condition. But I think it’s important that we go through these hardships because it shapes us. I like to think of it as we all start out as a leveled field; perfectly even, but as we go through life hills and valleys form from our experiences; from our mistakes. This really made me think for some reason but I’m happy that Danny is deciding to cope and heal in his own time instead of the fast and easy because the latter is just superficial. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Moral of the story we are all landscapes

This is so good so far