Reviews for Good Guy Jaune
OGOPmeatb4lls chapter 6 . 7/25
amazing I hope you update soon
Damion Tinsley chapter 6 . 7/8
This story is perfect the off-hand snied comments are just grate and really what bump it from good to grate. Can't wate for next chapter.
Sum9 chapter 6 . 6/22
Ha! It's funny because trouble is about to happen XD
Sum9 chapter 2 . 6/18
I don't see why he doesn't just let someone unlock his aura. He has Jaune Arc's body. It may not be his soul, but his soul is now firmly on Remnant. I'd figure that would be the only requirement for activating a soul.

Good to see you can work comedy and friction into a team dynamic with not-Jaune and his new teammates. Not everything has to be ad-hoc agreeable in a group. Friction and chaos are what keep things interesting.
Sum9 chapter 1 . 6/18
FFN really needs to let us list up to 5 crossover titles in our stories. They have the tech (ha!) to allow it, despite whatever nightmare spaghetti code they refuse to rewrite. I wasn't mentally prepared for this to be a Worm x Destiny x RWBY crossover, but here we are.

And man if your different version of Pyrrha isn't hilarious. I mean dayum. Good thing she has a more competent partner now. This is a fun read. Keep up the good work.
Han Is DEAD chapter 1 . 6/9
Yandere Pyrrha when?
deoxeyses chapter 6 . 4/30
Nice
TigerJacob chapter 6 . 4/30
Sadly I read through this way too fast and now am crossing my fingers you will be continuing to update it lest I get left out high and dry.

Ill admit the worm bits confuse me but I played destiny so I'm not completely lost. So is this a sequel to his life in the worm or did you give him a multithreaded backstory?

Enjoying the character dynamics and arguably the fact that most weapons are of an equal power scale to the world of revenant...hive gods and wyvern grimm, eh close enough.

Thanks for the read!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/29
Ignore the comment asshole talk, I would befriend this dude
Uday Sra chapter 6 . 4/29
good
superbook1234 chapter 6 . 4/28
The protagonist is really tuning unlikable. He's purely being an asshole. That doesn't make the story funny, it makes it hard to read. Continuing to bully the bully doesn't make him a hero, it makes him another bully. The whole cocky attitude is making me want to root for him to fail.
Golden Nova chapter 6 . 4/28
I don't know about others but this guy just seems like an asshole to me. And no I Don't like Assholes, I cannot even comprehend why people like them.
nathnathn chapter 5 . 4/27
Am i the only one who cant help but think what the last city would think of our humanoid ghost?
Also great work again.
Asomatous chapter 4 . 4/27
That shit-talking fills me with the will to live, I swear to god.

Glynda you naughty and unfairly attractive creep stop that.

Ozpin: So, what can your magic do?
Jaune: More than yours that's for fucking sure.
Ozpin: Really? MY magic comes from The Brother Gods. Where does YOURS come from?
Jaune: Your mom.
Ozpin:
Jaune: Okay MY mom. She's the Gardener of Life and in comparison your gods are a pair of twinks.
Yinko chapter 4 . 4/27
So far I've never seen a story where this situation happens (Ozpin thinking/knowing that the protagonist has magic) make the story better. Often it is the pivotal plot point that ruins the entire premise. If I had to guess, I'd say that the reason is that Ozpin and the plot points that surround his are simply obnoxious, the more involved he and they get in the story the worse it becomes.

Similar arguments could be made for most authority figures from other fandoms as well (Dumbledore, Hiruzen Sarutobi, etc.) but that is more because authors don't understand how the social structures of authority and power function that anything intrinsic to their characters, here it's the other way around.
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