Love this story.. also love Scott's hair natural and slightly
disheveled...but love him in all his looks...

This story has so many elements I like:
A Police Investigation
An original character
Whomp
The Original cast.

Thank you!

Really good story. Excellent Danny whump, nice banter, sweet McDanno. Danny mentoring the young Jonathan felt so right. Vey well done. Eager for your Gravity story.

Got a few more wonderful chapters read today. Totally enjoyed them all, especially this exciting Danny whump and the alarming cliff hanger.

So excited I got to read a couple more chapters and got some wonderful Danny heroics and resultant Danny whump too. Very well thought out and written. Hoping I can squeeze in some reading time tomorrow.

Lovely ending to the story, thanks for a wonderful read

Excellent chapter, I felt like I was right in the room experiencing everything first hand.. All of the drama...it seemed as though it was being played out in slow motion. Very sensory, very tactil, so descriptive in every way. Yoo do each of the characters justice and I love the descriptive way you write... allowing the reader to feel like they're right there.

I decided to start reading this today with the intention of reading the first few chapters but once I started I couldn't stop. Absolutely loved this. Officer Kekuka was a great character, very well written. Can't wait to read The Gravity Of The Situation. I will have reread the other two.

Fantastic story, all the way through! This is exactly the kind of story I love! And as much as I like and appreciate the newer characters, this is my favorite list of characters for stories. Also love how you wrote Officer Kekuku - a great OC. Danny taking him under his wing and mentoring to him. With just a touch of Steve jealousy. Bravo!

I guess I better go back and find Gravity now! Thanks for a great story.

Danny probably enjoyed having Jonathan around so much because he actually listened to what he was told!

Oo I loved your Gravity series. I look forward to The Gravity of the Situation.
Great ending to this story. Thanks for sharing.

Good both are healthy enough and all are on way home. And Danny got Jonathan straightened out. he knows Danny getting hurt wasn't his fault.

A great story ! Thanks for this and stay safe and healthy!

Awesome! Can’t wait for the next one.

Really loved this story-so sad it’s ended. Nice that Danny could nurture Jonathan, and also give him some confidence. Maybe he should think about becoming a paramedic!
Thank you for this wonderful distraction, and look forward to reading a Gravity sequel.