Reviews for The Witch of the Bay
GLCW2 chapter 1 . 7/14
This is fantastic and there really needs to be more of it! Thanks for posting.
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 6/6
Interesting start
scottyheartfilla chapter 1 . 5/24
loving it already keep up the good work
ulfark chapter 1 . 5/20
My first thought after reaching the ending was "what Danny doesn't think it might be an imposter. He lives in a world where strangers and mind controlling capes are a thing."

Okay this is Danny believing what he wants to believe or him just thinking it is a drunken stupor induced hallucination but i'd like some disbelief in the next chapter before he fully accepts it.

Other than that it is an decent premise but i need more before i can judge it.

There's no original hook that i see. Taylor has got powerful magic and returned in time to save her dad but what's next? Is someone going to refuse to recognize her as alive? Is the PRT going to give her grief, thinking she's a construct of Danny playing the part of Taylor like the Siberian did for Manton?

Or is it going to be the usual get revenge on the bullying trio indirectly and clean up the city one gangbanger at a time? What is her goal?
xyvortex chapter 1 . 5/20
Nice start, I'm interested to see where you take this story.
suziq968 chapter 1 . 5/5
Well, this should be all sorts of amazing. Following in hope. Crucioing Shadowbitch would be bad right? Yeah, don't care. Although, your Taylor will probably come up with something way more creative.
sandipi chapter 1 . 4/25
I can hear 'Hell March' by Frank Klepacki and 'Night on Bald Mountain' by Disney playing. 'Angelina Jolie as the Evil Queen' for style points. Taylor is going to rule!
Scribble Novice chapter 1 . 4/20
More of this pls
pallendin pie chapter 1 . 4/16
should be good
sean.peatman chapter 1 . 4/15
Great beginning. I hope this get continued.
CreativeLibrarian chapter 1 . 4/14
Again, you drew me in with A Life Twice Lived, and I had to comment on Altered Paths, so here I am again. This sounds so freaking AWESOME! Yes yes YES! Can't wait for more, can't wait for multi-millionaire Taylor because seriously her potions will make her the envy of all! Mwuhahaha! Ahem...ok but seriously this is great, and I love even just the hint of this concept. PLEASE tell me Taylor gets a chance at justice by using a Patronus Charm against Sophia? Because that would be epically hilarious.
pepijn30 chapter 1 . 4/14
this shit is going to be glorious from what i can see
The Last Rising Of The Phoenix chapter 1 . 4/13
Yes :D
GG157 chapter 1 . 4/13
I look forward to Halbeard whipping out his nanothorn halberd, and Taylor just picking up a twig and enchanting it to do the same job but better. It will be a inevitable glory.
suzga chapter 1 . 4/11
Please continue, this sounds like great fun XD
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