I love the chapter. I can fully understand Yona's uncertainties, especially since she used to be a jinchuriki. Finding and falling in love could be labeled as an 'forbidden fruit' to her because she risks death by childbirth like her former mother, Kushina. And also the thought of bearing her very soul to someone also terrifies her because she's so used to be guarded on some level. I really wonder how the Naruko/Hak relationship would develop!

I really didn't expect the reveal to be so soon! I also didn't expect anyone to be able to tell this at all? No complaints from me tho, I'm just super curious how Hak will react to this huge secret that was hidden from him for years.

Yeah, jokes after the death of his father? Then she will laugh more with joy.

She was not even shocked by his death and did not even hate the killer.
It would be more plausible if she immediately decided to take revenge on her cousin, for example, to blow up the entire castle along with all the traitors.

Naruto’s actions, of course, do not add empathy.

Who said revenge is bad?

Yay! Another Update! I loved all the fluff included in this chapter!

Awwww, I hope Naruko Realizes her feelings... Immediately because I honestly can't wait! There is quite a bit of flashbacks, I really just skip over them since I'm only here for the Hak and Yona romance. It's definitely frustrating to have Yona be a blushing schoolgirl and extremely dense. She needs to pull herself together, she's a grown woman for God's sake! I'm actually not here for submissive Naruko, it's kind of irritating to see her act in such a way. Really girl, show Hak who's boss!

Welcome back! Gosh, Naruto just take your man, shove him to a wall/three and kiss him until Hak is nothing but a whimpering mess or something... How are you so damn dense!? Even canon Naruto isn't that bad, he may not know other people's feelings towards him but he sure as hell knows his own feelings and how does crush feels, I mean just watch The Last:Naruto the movie. He knew he loved Hinato, so he went for it. This Naruto needs to do that too, there's no way she didn't ahem *feel the love* from herself right?

Also, I noticed one thing, you sure do love flash backs... They're always half chapters long... Almost like anime Naruto fillers..lol.

I kinda hope instead flashbacks the plot, the Present could move. I don't think there's really need to show everything through flashbacks, the past is the past. It doesn't need to be half chapter long descriptions of long gone past... Just some mentions from Naruto and sometimes remembering the most important things and bits is enough. These flashbacks isn't even important plot point for the present, just random stories about Naruto's past... Like fillers.

It's kinda feels like I'm reading two fics at the same time. Two fics telling different stories. Or like watching those Naruto fillers.

Muscle memory is a mental thing, not physical. What this mean though, is she will have to get used to a smaller and weaker body.

Nice chapter! Now since Yona can open up more about her past and true self, I wonder how that would affect her relationship with Hak in the future? Hope to see the next chapter soon!

Love the story! I really hope their relationship blooms in upcoming chapters or they have little moments at least, i didnt think the kiss happened too soon at all, i love story that jump into the romance and dont push it off forever, but lemon with them would be amazing! But i have a question: in chapter 7 Hak calls out for Naruko When they were being attacked by the fire clan... is he also going to be a reincarnation but just hasnt been awaken yet? Also Yona/Naruko talked about their bodies differences do you think Yona/Naruko and the dragons will find a way for naruko to morph their bodies together to make her even stronger since shes already working handling chakra and such?! Sorry for all the questions i just love this story and love the idea of Naruko/Hak together!

Hi,

I was pleasantly surprised by Yona's reaction to the kiss. I was not expecting it. I can see Yona's or Naruko's real personality shining through now that she is out of the castle. It seems that the more the truth comes out about her past , the more her princess facade breaks. A lot about herself is being revealed. How is she going to react when more of her scars and open wounds are brought up again?

Yay, kiss! But hmm... Wasn't that kinda fast? In my mind Hak was more a type who will torture himself with his live for Yona. After all he never truly acted upon his feelings in canon. Not even after he confessed. He was more of letting Yona lead the relationship..

Also...umm, shouldn't he at least confess before kissing her or stopping inch away from her lips and letting Princess decide? After all Hak thinks that he's but a bodyguard a meatshield for Princess thus lower than her? after all not matter childhood friends Yona's still Royalty.

**Spoiler!he acted only when YONA kissed him**

Hmm... Can't she be the silent assault too? There's no need for Naruto to be staying safe distance and being only tactician.

Shinobi doesn't need to be physically strong, or anything. just very skilled being unseen and having very good stealth mode, I mean look at Anbu their whole motto is being one with shadow and darkness. Which Naruto has as ex-shinobi..or well no so EX. Once ninja always ninja, after all ninja is not a job you can just retire but a life style one is born to. Just like no one in Anbu truly retires.

Not to mention Naruto has Rasengan and Sage mode, and sage mode alone makes you super strong and combine that with Rasengan the VERY destructive Ball of death and her deathly skills as war veteran and Ninja, she's basically stronger than anyone in this world even without most of her chakra.

Nooo! Kurama! Why did you take Kurama away from Naruto they're soulbondend partners! Living together dying together, two soul one body! Sob...sob.. I can't! Naruto without Kurama doesn't feel right, feels so wrong.

I had hoped Kurama would've reborn together with Naruto maybe like Naruto,as lesser chakra being but still together with Naruto.

This review will be short, sorry...

First: I love your story, I love your pairing, it’s great! Thanks for sharing. Seriously, it’s really brave of you.

Second (and last): I can not believe you baited me like that! They kiss and that’s it?! I understand Yona/Naruko thoughts and her complex(?), feelings of inferiority(?) –I don’t know how to put it– but still! They kiss and try to forget about it?! You sadist. I’m so disappointed. Sigh... as long as you put some fluff in every chapter, I shall forgive you.

Thanks for writing this story! And don’t forget the fluff! ;)

Hi,

Loved the drama and learning more about Naruko. I am curious about the kids scene. Naruko is very damaged in regards to love. Is she over Sasuke? Is moving on with Hak too soon? Will either of them regret the kiss? How will this relationship progress/regress? I can't wait to learn more!