| Reviews for Beastars the forgotten one |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 8/6 I really like this story and I hope to see the next chapter soon :) |
 Hacker117 chapter 1 . 8/4 I’m so excited to read what happens next! |
| arodriguez0412 chapter 4 . 8/3 I can’t for the announcement of Forrest, I’m nervous on how these animals would react to him |
| Mr Beaver Buttington chapter 1 . 7/31 You REALLY need to work on your grammar. Like, really badly. |
| ZaikoSSJBlue chapter 11 . 7/17 I'm really enjoying the story, and I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| arodriguez0412 chapter 11 . 6/30 Who is T%H4,0*RNS? Is it Legoshi’s instinct? |
| Amber Mint chapter 1 . 6/26 Hi, I just wanted to say that i really enjoy this chapter and I'm definitely going to be reading some more, but the thing is I found that your sentences don't have commas in them. I think the sentences are pretty well written out, but theres no rest between the words and that can get a bit confusing (for me at least) A trick that may help you if you have trouble figuring out were to put them is to speak out loud after you finish the sentence, put a comma around the area you need to take a breather, or when you're kinda switching the direction of the sentence. I hope I don't sound too rude, and I myself am not the greatest at grammar, but I just wanted to try to help with this already interesting concept. Like I said before, cool sentences, just needs a bit more structure. Practice makes perfect! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/24 Good chapter... Finally some action... I wairing so anxious to see what will happen with Forrest |
| Kovu13 chapter 11 . 6/26 Can't wait for the next chapter I hope Forrest and Jack will be able to make up |
| arodriguez0412 chapter 10 . 6/8 I hope you do more chapters, but I’m nervous for Forrest to appear at the assembly, showing him self in front of all the animals and jack be in shock about it. Of course Legoshi hiding |
| Moonlight800 chapter 1 . 6/1 You have improved considerably in grammar, as well as progressing in the plot, (slow but sure), I hope to see another chapter soon. |
| Ironically Challenged chapter 1 . 6/1 "Freak weirdo creature monster." is a very bad omen for the rest of this story, and it's in the summary. |
| Tommy423 chapter 9 . 5/14 This story is doo doo feces |
| yolloooooo chapter 9 . 5/12 Summary of this fanfic "hand on his shoulder". Its so anoying, Please less cursi friendship , more action. |
| SAK-96 chapter 9 . 5/14 I wonder if Forrest will realize at some point that most animals are supposed to actually fear humans. Although, the ones in Beastars have never been in contact with humans, so maybe they don’t know how dangerous we can be. Still, their instincts should be telling them that something about Forrest is dangerous. Not that he is, or is he? |
