Reviews for Harry Potter: Crucible
Nagilover4ever chapter 2 . 3/24
Love it. Update soon.
alix33 chapter 2 . 3/22
I loved Luna in this chapter.
RT89 chapter 2 . 3/21
Another attempt at a crucible tale huh, good luck.
Gracealma chapter 2 . 3/20
Serious talk and emotional.
I feel like crying at this ...
DS2010 chapter 2 . 3/20
I love Luna she is wiser beyond her years and is not as judgement as some others. I think she was just what Harry's needs right now.
staar81 chapter 2 . 3/20
wonder which one he'll chose...
ArlyssTolero chapter 2 . 3/20
An interesting second chapter, my friend. Nice Van Helsing reference.

Luna proved herself to be much more of a confidant when Harry needed it, and I can see her being the one to provide the crucible dialogue to Harry. As to what he'll choose to be? That will be an interesting question to answer. And I guess next chapter is when we'll find out how Ginny, Ron, and Hermione are dealing with the aftermath of the Department of Mysteries. It will certainly be interesting to see what they decide.
grimmich chapter 2 . 3/20
I find it interesting and more importantly- telling, that luna didn't mention ron and hermione... what does she know that harry doesn't I wonder... dun-dun-DUN!
fraidykat chapter 2 . 3/20
No I think you are wrong there is a Luna and Harry pairing in the purer aspect she will be like a guiding light but not a love interest. You took Garth Brooks song about the fire cant remember the name.
Thank you,
Juanita
Winged Seer Wolf chapter 2 . 3/20
Some of the lines remind me of Alice in Wonderland. I wonder since Harry is Alice, who would be the Cheshire Cat ie the trickster, oh I know (Dumbledore), Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum (Fred and George), The Queen of Hearts (Umbridge), the White Rabbit (Filch), The King of Hearts (Fudge).

Just an interesting albeit crazy thought.
retired10 chapter 2 . 3/20
Very interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Thank you for sharing.
DarkRavie chapter 2 . 3/20
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Jostanos chapter 2 . 3/20
I'd like to think that Luna being Harry's anchor into "normalcy" as a good thing.
I'd~ be worried if something terrible happens to Luna and Harry either backslides a little, or goes full blown RAMBO on whomever harmed her.

I think that Harry may take some time to think about what she had informed him about and, eventually, choose the third option. :)

*chuckles* If Harry considers Luna to be anything to him beyond being a friend is that he _may consider her to be a "little sister" of sorts. :)
Darth Void Sage of the Force chapter 2 . 3/20
I'm assuming Harry will become the target of politicians.
Jaxom Wolf 89 chapter 1 . 3/19
Excellent start. The more stories I read, the more I really dislike Dumbledore. Keep up the good work
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