You need punctuation work. Also, split your paragraphs up more often. Not a bad start so far. No issue with the story, rather the formatting and punctuation.

Quite an interesting development going on. I wonder how these vigilantes, crime syndicates, and Midoriya connect together? Hope it’s consistent with what could be an interesting take on what Izuku will be capable of.

Nice little tidbit on a new character and his skills!

Great as always :). I'll admit that the backstory and fight scenes for Hikari are growing more and more interesting. It's not often an OC in fan fiction is able to grab attention so easily

Loving this story so far!

I'm really interested to see how the new characters you have introduced will progress :) you are doing such a great job! Keep it up!

This story has a lot of potential, but you should really get a beta reader to make it more readable. Trust me, it'll be worth it.

"I am All Might's secretary cum agent"

I am fucking dead.

i'll state right now - I didn't read it - but if you want to ship tododeku or bakudeku keep it gay or not at all! im not saying your a bad writer it's just a pet peeve when people change the gender of 1 (one) person in a gay/lesbian ship to make it straight. thank you.

Hey don't let those bashers get you down mate :). They don't know a good read if it hit them in the butt, obviously.

Excited that he finally met the energy! I'm curious as to how you are going to develop the character now in this universe

Kurama vs Nōmu - waiting for the fight :)

I enjoyed it. I'm excited to see what kind of training Izuku is put through, and what kind of conversations he ends up having with Kurama.

I'm loving how you are introducing chakra as its own unique-ish thing into this universe. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to next update :)

Dang it these chapters always go by so fast, can’t wait for more!

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BATMAN!?