Please stop using "Ara, ara..." that shit takes the immersion out like a motherfucker.

Keep him in the True North

splendid

Good start - I think it would be super cool for MC to become something of a legend in the North (tho it could turn cringy fast so be careful) - something like Craster where Crows are allowed but he isn't a sshole and also isn't hated by the free folk. And yeah, good change on the system - I'm a grimdark fan, but that method of gaining power was just nasty (and very unhygienic). Looking forward 2 more!

I say give him garruk power over beast to summon and control them in mtg only green beast make or make him like beast master form beast king!

Like this fic, liked previous more, because it showed the harsh reality of ASOIAF and magic in it. But can you write 2 fics at the same time? Knew many authors who couldn't manage time to write to the end even one

Thank you for not choosing stand

If you wanted to be King-beyond-the-wall the swordmanship and negotiation are the perks to get. Strength to make them respect you and charisma to make them follow.

Like this story but hope mc can still learn to sail to leave beyond the wall with a tribe

how about save Sansa and have them fall in love

Holy shit, I commented under the previous story about how great it would be to read about this guy but beyond the wall, and here it is :O Thanks!

Anyways, it looks like a standard chapter with the introduction, and the like, so I won't say anything beyond that it fulfilled its function.

Now about the premise. If you're going, with the mage/warg/something, it would make more sense if this gruesome way to gain power was implemented here, instead of in the other story, but somehow, ritualistic sacrifice under the moonlight sounds even better. I mean it's creepy and horrible, but I can imagine it, being somewhat striking. Just visualize this: an altar at the top of the mountain peak with a bound human strapped to its surface, the MC standing over this unfortunate soul with bloodied hands gleaming in the moonlight, with bones of his previous victims under his feet. The chills man!

Anyway, I hope the Symbiot will be next. I love all the creepy stuff that can be done with magic, and in ASOIAF such creepy stuff seems to be a price for power.

Anyway, great job, and I hope you'll update it soon!

Interesting

Making the far north civilized and an power would have been cool, but there is the problem of the others..