OMGaius! So glad I found this. I love it. Your writing is excellent; you are amazing with words. Beautifully written and I am so pleased you gave it three chapters! Thanks for a wonderful little story.

Hugely enjoyed this thanks so much for sharing!

Each new point of view reveals a bit more of what had happened. This is so good.
May we have one on Leon's perspective, please? He's handling the prisoners. Maybe start the chapter from the battle.
I'm excited for more.

Perfect second point of view. intriguing question of whether Gwaine knows.

Fantastic. Very well written. I love it.

Really liked this and I do hope that Merlin or Arthur fills you in on the rest of the story.

I really like the idea of Gwaine knowing and maybe not telling Merlin. There should be some that could figure it out since Merlin wasn't really any good at keeping it a secret. I always thought that Gwaine should know.

Enjoyed the 'one shot' Vanvdreamer. Many thanks.

nice.

Lovely story!

I really, really liked your unintentional character study! I strongly urge Merlin and Arthur to let you in on that little secret so you can share it with the rest of us! Thanks!

Aw that was nice... I really like the way you write, it's all soft and warm and prickling at just the right moments (that doesn't make sense ugh) The flow is good and the dialogues great, as well as the whole "you're safe" subtlety that was pretty interesting! I love reading you :) Thank you for the tri-shot!

This was another great addition and end to the story!

Good one. Always love Gwaine. Not a fool that one. More perceptive that most realise.
Many thanks.

I don't know whether to hug you or shake you.

Hug you for giving us this gem. This very INSIGHTFUL gem. Full of truth I didn't know I didn't know, and brotherly love, and caring for Merlin. Which is just about perfect.

But shake you because darn you, I STILL need to know how they got in this mess. And now where it goes from here. Because you KNOW that Arthur will puzzle over this. Why his friend and servant doesn't feel safe. Puzzle until he figure it out...

I can break out the puppy eyes again...

Glad to see him safe. And speaking of safe...
That was a very interesting thought that a Gwaine shared with Arthur. You have done a great job on this! Will there be more? Please say there’s more! I stink at puppy eyes but I have been known to bake fantastic virtual brownies!