Reviews for Second Chance (Harry Potter time travel fanfic)
QHLuver chapter 19 . 5h
Oh snap! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25
Ok so this is basically a first person version of Merlin’s Boxes, a much better written story that was sadly abandoned in 2018. If your going to blatantly steal a story at least give credits
Ielmie chapter 1 . 7/24
Could you please give credit to the singers and/or songeriters of the songs in the notes at the beginning or end? It probably wasn't your intention, but the fact that you don't mention them makes it seem like you are trying to claim you wrote them.

On an unrelated point, while I absolutely love your musical taste, it doesn't work in the context of this story. While hermione is a time-traveler she is also an 11 year old girl, and having her sing songs about relationships and other adult themes is really discordant with the image she is trying to portray. Furthermore, I'm not sure how thriving the country music scene is in Britain (especially in the 70's when this story was set).
Arodri chapter 18 . 7/3
I’m so excited to see the Sirius confrontation! I’m nervous for him to find out her secret because he’s so brash, but he’s also incredibly loyal so I’m torn and just way too excited!
ElectricAshess chapter 17 . 6/29
Please please please update this story soon! I really love this story and can’t wait to see what you come up with for it!
ElectricAshess chapter 17 . 6/29
Ooh I really loved this story! I hope you update soon ️
Arodri chapter 17 . 6/14
I loved this update! It’s so great seeing the teachers take notice! Thank you so much for sharing! This is one of my absolute favorite stories!
Arodri chapter 16 . 5/29
I was so excited to see this update notification today! I love this story and this was another wonderful chapter!
Sandra Ortiz chapter 5 . 5/18
Hi your story is fine but one thing bothers me is in 1971 they didn't have CDs maybe you could have said "listening to her transistor radio"
HowlowMoon chapter 2 . 5/14
And the songs bother me also. It’s suppose to be the 70’s, and you have her playing “newer” songs.

But again your story and I’ll deal. Keep up the great work and I can’t wait to read more!
HowlowMoon chapter 1 . 5/14
Loving this story! The only thing that bothers me is Ravenclaws emblem is a Eagle not a raven. But it’s your story!
I haven’t read anything like it so far. Keep up the great work and can’t want to read more!
Arodri chapter 14 . 5/7
Wow this story is wonderful! I freaking love prankster Salazar and cannot get enough of this.

I love how unique this story is and I’m spitefully thrilled that Dumbledore isn’t the heir. I’m so hoping that Hermione shows some of her Animagus forms to McGonagall though! I’d love to see what she thinks.
Roxanne-4 chapter 14 . 5/1
I’m really enjoying your story and writing style. Please can you include some classes and teachers, as well as more interaction with Hermione and her classmates
Padfoot'smyMan chapter 4 . 4/15
What is Hermione's name? In chapter 3 you had her inform the snake that she was Hermione Irina Evans and in this one, she introduces herself to Tom as Hermione Rose Evans. Then when she introduces herself to Fabian Prewett it is back to Hermione Irina.
Grubby92 chapter 1 . 3/30
What, where is the rest?

Do you know how bloody good this story is? What am I suppose to do In quarantine when I can’t read one good story that actually has an ending.

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