Absolutely amazing story. It had everything I loved. So please keep going will you. Can't wait to see what's next.

Definitely another amazing chapter of you. Loving it all and so looking forward to more.

Another emotional and intense chapter and the end is rather painful. I felt so sorry for Jay. Another brilliant chapter. Looking forward to more.

Brilliant! So emotional. Loved it.

Great chapter. So emotional. Brought tears to my eyes. Loved it.

Another amazing chapter. Loved it all, but still awaiting the confrontation with their father. Update please.

Absolutely loving this story. Love it all. Wouldn't change a thing, so please keep going. Looking forward to more.

Another great chapter. Had to read it twice to make sure I didn't miss anything. Still angry at Will, especially essentially blaming Jay for not telling anyone. He should have noticed something was off on his own instead of just enjoying himself being the chosen one. Can't stand upton and having to insert herself. Tired of her referring to her past hinted at abuse. It's about Jay, not you. Poor Jay along with the abuse and injuries everyone is trying to control his life and how he deals with his father. It should only be between Jay, taking the lead as it is his life, Will and their father. Voight and everyone else should back off and quit making decisions for him. Really enjoying your writing of this intensely emotional story about Jay. Can't wait for next chapter.

Great chapter. Glad that the brothers did talk. Loved the Will/Hailey talk and the one between her and Jay. I find the last part quite intense and emotional. Poor Jay.

Can’t wait for the next update! I hope he goes home with Hank!

Fantastic, emotional chapter. Loved it all.

This chapter brought me to tears. Absolutely amazing. Loved it.

The end brought tears to my eyes. I felt so sorry for Jay. He just wants to go home. So sad. Please keep posting will you.

Great chapter. Quite emotional. Loving it all. Keep posting please.

Amazing. More please.