Take time if you need it.

I feel like these "information dumps" can be laid out and implemented in a better way, . It feels kinda of like a fact sheet from school rightnow.

I like this better than the chapter that was a journal information dump.

thank you for the update :)

I am so sorry for your loss.
And I am sad that you lost interest, your story is amazing and I am always excited for more. I am very excited for the next chapter, I can't wait to see the rest of their meeting. I wonder why is Viper a cheamira? And undead? Zombies?

great chapter.

please update.

What if you made her hacker name something like Discord or Loki. Or, Atë, Até or Aite (/ˈeɪtiː/; Ancient Greek: ἄτη) is the Greek goddess of mischief, delusion, ruin, and folly. Até also refers to an action performed by a hero that leads to their death or downfall. Mythology personifies Atë as the daughter either of Zeus or of Eris. Or, Eris was the Greek goddess of chaos, strife and discord. She was the daughter of Zeus and Hera; according to other myths, she was the daughter of Nyx (dark night) alone. Her opposite was Harmonia. The equivalent Roman goddesses of Eris and Harmonia were Discordia and Concordia. (Pasted from google) generally unless you want it really obvious don't you Fox (or any varients of it), as that could easily link to her if you know her, but by using names that embody the stareotipical nature of a fox (mischievous tricksters) or just chaos in general. Though using Greek/Roman god/goddesses fits quite a bit with Nana having Mith in hers. Hope this helps.

PS: Love the story so far, it's great! 3

Puppy Hayato?

Wow, Nice twist. Will Viper be related to her? Shamal was a very nice surprise. n.n

I think it might be Takeshi? Because the mist covers the sky leaving water which leads to rain..I think.. but anyway lot’s of love!thank you for the chapter!

I like ur theory on Nana not what she seemed like in the original story, i mean she might be dtzy but she not tht stupid enough if not some bastard do sth to her right? Anyway, i love how you write this, don’t know about grammar problems coz as u can see i am at lost end as well so keep it up and please to keep on continuing this story

That cliffhanger please I just want to read more of your amazing story
*giving a lot of motivation and praise to the author*

I find it interesting that you are using the post cards for brainwashing Nana, and Nana knows about Flames. I wonder if she was a spy sent on Imetsu. Are the Kitsune/Silver flames another version of Sky?

Love the new chapter! The cliffhanger threw me off for a few seconds but overall, awesome! Lots of love!