Very nicely done. Favourite part is when Dragon smiles like Luffy, and the only reaction Luffy has to the (initial) serious stuff is eyeing his dads plate :-P

Amazing fic...as gud as the prequel...if not more

Hi!
Me encanto, lo amo y es justo lo que tanto había estado buscando.
El Dragon que tanto anhelaba por leer. Un padre de verdad.
Espero poder seguir leyendo historias de este tipo.
Mucha suerte. Besos.

Wauugh, my throat is tensed and thick with emotion. Amazing. This is the first time I’ve ever read Ace being released from his “sins”, and was so powerful and descriptive in his turmoil too. Great job, thank you.

We’re you thinking of Robin too when you said other children were victims of the government? She popped into my mind and I started wondering, what would have happened if Robin ever met Ace, before she got involved with Crocodile and saw this self-hating boy?