I really hope you make a second chapter where Garp told Ace about the truth.

I loved this! I don't know why Ace cursing everybody seemed to be so funny to me.

brilliant just brilliant!
I really love ace's reaction and garp laughing
oh and the nickname Firecracker!
what a good idea, you made my day this fic is just so hilarious!

haha, this was great! :)

I sorta want Garp to go tell him it's true afterwards XD

This story is more plausible than canon. Love it. I‘m reading this for the third time ‚cause it‘s so hilariously good.

Absolutely hilarious, and you definitely have a major point here!

Omg. This is how I wish it could have happenedThank you for writing this little one shot, my friend! It was just the little snack I needed to read.

All I could think while reading this was that THIS is Luffy's brother. Not what lots of people try to make him because of how he tried to get them to go away, not someone who internalized that he didn't deserve to live, but THIS.

Perhaps I'm missing something, but Sengoku's speech never sounded unbelievable to me.

I'm sorry, but that "Fuck You!" was WAYYYYY TOO FUNNY! Ah, god, that was satisfying. XD

that was hilarious.
I stg this would honestly work.
I never thought about it out of context but yeah, sengoku sounds like a goddamn fool! xD