Did glenn notice or recognize sophia

Nice will you be updating this story I mean I want to read more and what will happen with Naruto around since I am dying to see what will happen so please do more.

Sweet story. I hope that we get more chapters soon. I mean, it seems that Naruto will try and keep people safe, but sadly, we know that with the Walking Dead, that's not going to be easy.

And yes Sophia is saved, but I wonder when this takes place as it is way before season 2 of the show, you could have it that Ed left her, I mean we all know that is something he would do to his daughter I do see her and Sophia become best friends as we know Duck won't last long and it's needed for Kenny.

With other deaths, I would try and change some up, like Mark as Naruto would be smart to not trust strangers but need to wait and see.

This is really good hope you update soon and keep up the good work. Nice job with handling the chakra situation, I never really like fanfics when Naruto has full chakra capability cause it seems both unrealistic and makes a totally op character that could take on hordes like I can eat snickers bars. Over good work, I like the pairings and I hope you update soon.

Beth: What are you doing step-bro?

this is so amazing and I wonder will this be a story where they go back to the farm and meet Daryl, Rick and the others including Sophia's mother? Or is this more based off of something else? Also if they do go back to the farm and meet Sophia's mother is she going to be Naruto's mother who was for to leave him behind because of Ed?

I see some comments saying that yeah technically the game happens just as the virus of undeath is happening in real time and the Sophia indicent is happening arguably a couple of months after. You can go around this by having Sophia and her mother having left home from her abusive father to seek shelter ahead of him and they got lost on the way. That changes the TV series timeline but I an glad that Sophia isn't dead either.

About the chopping of the limbs and infection. I think that was edgy of the tv series but even in am outbreak like say the Covid 19, some people are the most vulnerable and some don't even show it which maybe means that a small percentage might even be immune. They just couldn't find that special person.

Anyway chapter was great. I really liked how you covered that crying woman in the motel and Lee's brother.
I think groups are important to survive in an outbreak and creating a self-sustaining camp is the best option for survival.
Beth was really funny how clingy she is to her set bro. But she needs to get her Ripley on to survive in this new world.

Great long chapter and almost no grammar mistakes. That is awesome.

As long as there are no dumb harems, this will remain in the "great stories" category

The Walking Dead video game is set before the original timeline of The Walking Dead TV Series, since I had Sophia saved earlier than when Glenn met up with Rick and everyone else, he didn't recognize her.

Why didn't Glenn say anything about Sophia? They sould have recognized each due to coming from the same small camp.

Looking forward to more keep it coming!

well good luck i hope you finish it and update regularly but other wise i like it and hope you give naruto a sword and more chakra and a rifle saw off shot gun

Naruto and Beth are wayyyy close for siblings. Step or not, only Naruto is aware he is adopted. Way too chummy, huggy, and in each others personal space to not be together. Not got a problem with the pairing, just that there was little lead up to it.

Not saying there is anything wrong with Brothers and Sisters hugging or anything but they are always having physical contact with each other.

Another issue is quite simply Naruto's reason for leaving. the leaving group have more capable people than the remaining group. All thats left on the farm is Hershel and Wife who are old, Shawn who is injured and potentially Maggie who may or not even arrive seeing as how there is a god damn Zombie Apocalypse outside.

The leaving group have more able bodied people capable of protecting their group. If I was Hershel I'd be pissed if my own son ditched his family when they badly needed him.

This is great so far, but no chakra pls. It will ruin any sense of conflict the story might have.

Off to a good start looking forward to more, it will be a lot of fun.