| Reviews for Oh Hel, The Unforeseen Avenger |
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   Kawaizem chapter 1 . 7/27 this is so underrated |
| HelgasSoppyBeav chapter 7 . 7/3 2000 year old warlord blushing when accused of flirting? Are you writing a virgin MC? That is so improbable. |
| gag-inomicon chapter 2 . 7/3 SO a few things; -Hel (Hela) is Friggas step-child according to the MCU wiki. Is that the case in your story? -The books. If you look at Norse mythology (or any sort of pagan practice) the borrow heavily on allegory or some sort of mysticism. The title of the instruction manual is very Harry Potter and the content even more so. The title of the book could be "The Ascension of Buri" or something. Even looking into real world Norse mythology, Odin's rise to power has so much symbolism, and many rites, rituals & trials. If you incorporated this kind of empowerment instead of a goofy wikiHow book your story would be so much more immersive |
| JoeMcLuvin chapter 4 . 6/28 I'm confused, how did he get the name Hades all of a sudden. Certain things don't add up and i'm getting slightly confused. |
| JoeMcLuvin chapter 3 . 6/28 He shouldn't be 10, he was 5 years old when you did a 10 year time skip. If he was 15 but looked 8,i would understand. But you mad him 10 over 15 years |
| laraferreira chapter 9 . 6/19 Loved it, please update! |
| Creature of Grimm chapter 9 . 6/17 :) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/15 Keep it up! |
| apostlelord chapter 9 . 5/31 i like the story so far. |
| SoSlimShady chapter 9 . 5/30 Your very last sentence has two symbols and instead of letters. |
| TehStorm chapter 9 . 5/26 Nice so far,tough i hope he will curb down a little on thor's behavior and patched up things a little with odin,because seeing they fight or indirectly express their dislike for each other every time they meet is getting rather tiresome. Also hope to see Sif getting together with the MC. Btw,i hope you can make a chapter(maybe latter on,like on captain america,thor or some other movie of the UCU),on how the earth's legends of asguard were affected by Hel. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/20 Not bad, hope this starts getting updated regularly again. |
| DG2 chapter 9 . 5/20 Yeah the MC is going to have some fun. |
| Rushstar32 chapter 9 . 5/20 The Tesseract is now in a safe location, for now. I can see Hel is more of Mother's child, he really loves her and she loves him. Training time once again, you can never be too prepared incase of battles coming. That line about not fighting another war until he's ready, something big is coming. Great Chapter Fury :)! |
| NazgulBelserion chapter 9 . 5/20 Everytime I see this story I'm just like GODDDDD how can you not have Hela here she's so fkin hot lol I was watching Ragnarok and man she's just so bae you know I wish I could write well I'd totally write a Self Insert and Pair Hela with him haha |
