Good story.

Oh boy. I can't believe the Charmed Ones just fell for it! Man oh man! I wish that something like this was like this in the episodes. By the way, you need line breaks, it would make it much easier to read.

Oh... so that explains why Cole went all crazy. I love it! I can't stand how Phoebe just tossed his heart away like that. It's so sad!

Great story hope to see more ..

I LOVE IT! I was pretty scared there for a while - I really thought this story was headed the same way as the show with Phoebe convinced that she was over Cole. But this was a great story with a very interesting new angle of a new society based on Halliwells and Turners and Cole as the Great One. The Other-Phoebe was a great foil for that part of the plot where Cole needed to tell Phoebe off. And I love the part with Cole Jr. - very good. Great story. I would love an epilogue - maybe a glimpse of life for the Turners after a few months?

After reading this story, it occurred to me that it seemed strange that the sisters, including Phoebe, who was a Pysch student, never realized that Cole needed help. Especially after his suicide attempt. Why is that?

Wonderful story!

No matter how hard Phoebe is on Cole, he still loves her no matter what! But things have been said that they will both have to deal with and it will be hard... especially for the sisters... To bad the story is already over!

I like the way a whole world revolve around cole and his principles. It makes the sister realise of the true nature of the man they considered a demon.

I'm so glad Phoebe and Cole have their son back. That was a very good idea to make him hate Phoebe like that! The boy has temper!

You're really gifted when it comes to fight scene! very well writen!

Great Story!

You do a very good job resolving the situation with Cole. This is an excellent alternative to what the show did!

Aw! Cute ending :)

Now, how about a sequal...