| Reviews for You're On Total Drama Island, Charlie Brown - REWRITE |
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dperson3569 chapter 1 . 6/14 I am glad that you came back. I lived your former story. Anyways, I hope life is treating you and your loved ones well. Hopefully, I am not too late to do this. |
Knifez chapter 1 . 5/20 And one of the old titans of TD fanfic returns! Exciting! I’m surprised I didn’t hear about this sooner! I must admit, I’ve read the original TDI-CB story and wasn’t too big of a fan. However, I have this a read and think it has a lot of potential. I’ll give it a follow, and I’m interested to see where you take it! |
Blonglik chapter 1 . 5/6 Please update this story :) |
bocaj297 chapter 1 . 4/22 Definitely excited to see where you take this. |
zafnak chapter 1 . 3/29 Just wanted you to know how stoked I am for this rewrite! OH YEAHHH! Totally followed so I can get all the rewritten goodness! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27 Are you still working on the ultimate ridonculous race |
nightmaster000 chapter 1 . 3/24 I am so PUMPED! Seriously was and still am a big fan of your original Charlie Brown in Total Drama story, so really excited to see how this reboot turns out. :) |
Team Gophers chapter 1 . 2/20 Like the original so interested in this. Hope Ezekiel Bridgette still happens. Anyway great start. |
Serious-Comedian chapter 1 . 2/16 I heard about your return to FFnet from another user on Reddit and I just wanted to offer you my sympathy. It's pretty tough what you've been through but you're human and I really appreciate the effort you put into Codette World Tour and your original You're on TDI Charlie Brown story. I thought You're on TDI Charlie Brown was pretty promising the first time around, and I really like all the love you gave to Zeke, Harold, and Cody! Even if it didn't age well, I still think it holds a special place in my heart as one of the first Total Drama fanfics I ever read. My main wish, however, is that Noah survives longer in your rewrite than the original story. I think you wrote Noah pretty well in your older stories and I want to see more of him. I'd be excited to read your rewrite! Good luck! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15 I would like to begin by saying thank you for giving another chance to such an interesting concept. I did like the original fic, I actually just finished reading it, but I do understand there is a lot of room for improvement. In fact, I can already see that this rewrite will be of great quality. I don’t normally write reviews but I really want to see this continued, so I’d like to offer this encouragement. I wish you the best, and eagerly await chapter 2! |
decoy73 chapter 1 . 2/14 I'm just wondering - since there's twenty-five people, how are the teams going to be? Five teams of five? One team of thirteen and a team of twelve? Or will one of the guys be immune for the first round? Will anyone find a way around saying Charlie's first name (Peppermint Patty calls him "Chuck") |
Gucci Mane LaFlare chapter 1 . 2/13 This was really good! The added backstory was quite welcome too. |
WeirdAlfan101 chapter 1 . 2/13 Oh boy, the king has returned! This is gonna be fun on a bun! The only thing I don't understand is that the Aftermath said that Alejandro and Sierra were going to be included as well, but looking this over, it still said "the other 22 contestants", instead of 24. |
Captain Skips chapter 1 . 2/13 Oh hey, this is back. I read the original a few months back when I was first getting into this show and all the fan stuff that goes with it, and it was pretty damn good. Though on reflection, I do agree with the points you brought up in Aftermath IV. And hey, this time I get to be along for the ride rather than coming in after the fact over a decade later (bet that makes you feel old). So yeah, this was great, the original was great, and if the improvements you talked about work out, this could be fantastic. |
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 1 . 2/13 It's here at last. Must say, I quite like the first chapter alone. Why do I want to strangle Lucy, though? Anyways, 22 teenagers, all of them 16 years old, and one 8 year old kid, Charlie Brown, kick off the series premiere of an AU Total Drama, with Total Drama Island. Duncan is right, though. Charlie Brown needs to muster all the courage he needs, because he's not dancing with kids his age this time. He'll be dancing with the big boys and girls now, teenagers no less, people who are 8 years his senior, and one among them is really good at manipulating people. Zoinks! |