interesting

in all fairness, this is the first code geass fan fic I am reading, so nothing to compare it to, but it shows promise, I hope for more in the future

the characters are acting in a believable manner, and it actually addresses a few what ifs I have had about the show (i.e. Lelouche not wearing a mask at least to the rebels, and them learning about geass sooner)

So then has this story once again been abandoned, and ironically right at the same point that the original author abandoned it. I mean the author's note does say that this is the last chapter that was from the original. I can't help be feel pretty disappointed, well I guess this is just another story to add to the list of abandoned fics on this website. Shame, I really was looking forward to seeing this fic continue.

You could add Euphemia to lelouch Harem. She has love him for a very long time. I believe she want to be with him.

I'm glad to see this story was picked up buy someone though I'm a bit bummed that Sayoko is not going to be a part of the harem. Maybe she could be paired with Jeremiah. Still good job, keep adding lemons where appropriate, and I'm looking forward to more.

About ninety percent of fanfics are just plain trash, and this one definitely doesn't stand out from the pile. Just your average self-insert of projecting yourself onto the main character and have him act out in ways that's totally OOC. And that's especially sad since you're not even the oringial creator, so you're just jerking off to someone else's fantasy. I'm sure anyone with a sound mind can break down this story and tell you why's it's garbage, but that's effort nobody is willing to spend. And openly adversiting to hating on one of the show's certain characters could be a fast way to garner the attention of unsophisticated audience, sure, but that just lowers the presumed quality of your work all the more. Although you can claim that since you're not the original author, that here on out the story will recover from the train wreck it's in, but I really doubt that. I can give you some more criticism in detail if you can defend your work, otherwise, just give up, man, you're gonna drop this story in less than three months, almost guaranteed.

I'd like to see some Lelouch x Cornelia if at all possible.

Leila was a commander of a small unit and she was kind to the point of doing anything to protect her friends. I think adding her to the story as a love interest for Lelouch would make it very interesting. She would be able to contribute to his plans and engage in strategic banter with him. Her main contribution would be to command in a knightmare on the front lines while Lelouch leads in the back.

hmm, given the title of this chapter, couldn't you had wrote more on this one as a extended version later on?

Man, you pump these out. I like that

Another excellent update. As far as other pairings go, you could probably put Rivalz with one of the girls from the side materials (Akito the Exiled or Oz the Reflection) or another girl from Ashford, like that Miya Hillmick girl or even Nina (even though that's a bit of a cop out). As for Jeremiah, maybe you could do him and Nonette Ennergram, the Knight of Nine.

Those two are going to make his life a living hell, i just know it.

Great chapter, I really like how the meeting went between Lelouch and Kallen's group. Already I feel like Lelouch's revealing the tragedy of his experiences will ultimately create a stronger belief in Lelouch by the group and prevent the cracks in that belief that formed later on in the series. Cracks that Lelouch's elder brother was able to use to convince them to ultimately turn on Lelouch in the second season. Plus I imagine if Lelouch can get the explanation of his Geass right that it will completely solidify their loyalty to him Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.

This is just as good as the original! Well done, brudda! Just a quick question: are there going to be any other pairings for some of the other characters in this story? I know you're probably going to shaft Suzaku as karma for being such a bullheaded dingus (which I'm perfectly ok with), but how about some of the ones who've been loyal and true to Lelouch (i.e. Jeremiah, Rivalz and Rolo if you bring him in)? I kinda hate to see them get the short end of the stick.

Hooray! Continuation!

awesome story like the premise I don't remember reading the original but this is good to see someone else take up something and continue it as I can see this is going to be a great story keep up the good work.