Found this story towards the beginning of the week and just got around to reading it. I had remembered the other two stories in the series but hadn't known you'd done a 3rd story (and written this year, too!). So that was nice to see.

It's always interesting to see different takes on Dave Sheppard. I like your take on him and that John actually has a little bit more family on Earth. It's also always nice to see Teyla and Ronon on Earth. Teyla especially more since she never got to visit Earth on the show (such a shame too).

I'd also love it if you would happen to do another story in this series. What would Enemy at the Gate be like with Dave and Cindy in it? Especially as we know now that he has the gene.

Hope you'll continue writing more Atlantis stories when you get inspired!

Such a great story! Its especially nice to have something to read during all this social distancing/quarantine stuff!

Aww this is such an amazing story. I love this universe with Dave, Cindy and the kids.

Really hope there will be more, you are an excellent writer and got me hooked within the first chapter.

Thank you for writing this

Loved this. Great story.

Great story!

So happy to see you still writing SGA. I could just picture these things happening. The story had just the right amount of action and warm family moments with both the team and John's relatives. And you didn't whump John too much, thankfully.

Love reading new SGA stories.
Thank you

Great story! I've enjoyed Shepherd interactions with his family, always wished they would have done episodes like this on theshow. Some of my favorite moments have always been the team dynamics, which you do so well. Thank you for continuing to do stories about this great time. I look forward to reading more by you

Thanks for the adventures! It was good to be back in SG again.

I forgot how much I missed this show, thanks for taking me back. I love a good Sheppard on Earth fic and I really loved the scenes with Sheppard and O'Neill!

Well, the team didn’t get much resting done, but they say a change is as good as a rest! I’m guessing the hiding in the middle of clothes racks is a universal kid trick. My son did the same at about that age. Well, he was that age the first time. He did it several more times too, but it was never as scary as that first time because we knew where to start hunting! Shopping is far too boring for toddlers.

Thanks for the story.

Sorry! The review including the story about my son hiding in the clothes racks several times was from me. I didn’t realise I’d been logged out. Anyway, thanks again for the story!

Loved it
Hope there is more to come

Always enjoy your stuff. Keep up the good work!

Loving this story! I love that Dave knows what he does now.