It's a interesting story and hope it's continued but I really like jaune underdog and just plain I hope to help in the end character but tainted by doubts and confidence crush due to no one believing in him or allow him help to achieve his dream till pryhha... Hope to see as much as Jnpr as rwby you can make them be a mirror to rwby story where jaune become a dual protagonist showing the difference path and story tah nruby. That will surely distinguish the sotry more and make it much more entertaining. Not only that Team Jnpr member have a lot of room to play with and quite a tragic backstory too. The bless team vs the Cursed team as it is... Bless is RWBY btw since no matter what others say their situation is much better than Team Jnpr especially in later volumes... Also hope jaune is not made to just a idiot comic relief cause he does have a sharp mind... Maybe his reason for being weak is using a deck he is not used to using and also his hesitance to play against human and unsure since he only train on how to beat grim

Awesome story. Keep up the good work :)

This is rather good.

First off, going by the AN in the last chapter, I hope everything is going alright with you buddy. Though this is a great fic, I don't want it to be something that you feel like you have an obligation to. A life is worth more than some fanfic over the internet.

Didn't reviewed the last chapter because I was waiting for the conclusion of the duel to give my final verdict: if the rest of the fics will be of this quality, then I'm all for it! This was a well-presented duel with great interactions with the characters and showed a snip of their ideologies as well. Beautiful.

When I was reading chapter 2, I recognized the three dragons immediately, Timaeus in chapter 3 basically confirms it. Based off of that, I can already guess what Ozpin's deck is, though I'm curious who holds the other two legendary dragons.

Surprised about Dark Rebellion being in Weiss's collection. Out of all the monsters for Weiss to wield, Dark Rebellion was near the bottom. Was expecting something with beauty or grace like Stardust Dragon, Blue-Eyes, or even Galaxy-Eyes, but then again, this is too early for me to guess what kind of deck Weiss has. That said, you got Weiss's personality down during these two chapters. Can't wait to read more about her. I seriously want her to lose to get faced with a little bit of reality.

Just gonna guess that Blake's deck is Lunalights because what else could it possibly be (if not, then some Beast-Warrior/Beast types) and Jaune's might be Noble Knights or some kind of warrior deck which he has no idea how to use. Would not be surprised if Jaune tries to summon a Level 5 monster and wonder why his disk is malfunctioning similar to Joey's first duel in Battle City.

All in all, great last two chapters. Can't really think of much to criticize over at the moment.
Believe in the heart of the cards!

Great finish to awesome duel. I think that if Pyrrha went with her minimal force and summoned Excalibur there is big chance that she would lose.

Hot Red Dragon Archfiend is great boss monster for Yang. Lots of attack and great aggressive affect preferring opponent to be in offense. It is a dragon that look great and is so beefy that it is easy to see its punching things.

I have checked archetype so Rhongomyniad did not surprised me. Atmosphere of its summoning and battle was awesome. This thing is a beast with its only weakness being losing materials and power each turn but not much can withstand its full power and very high cost to bring it at full power, here lies its real weakness. I didn't know about extra swords they have awesome effect.

It is good that Xiao Long was able to awaken Nikos passion. I suppose that on the beginning members of RWBY will be at two camps. Sisters will have heart but will be little wild. Other two will be more refined and pragmatic but lack passion. They will be paired to address this issues. I also think that it is source of Weiss problem, she see cards as tools and not extension of her soul so she can't xyz summon.

At the end we have some plot relevant talk with some foreshadowing but I am to outdated with lore to interpret it in any way. I have checked "Number" on wiki but it went way over my head. While I will gladly read this story this time I will be mostly passenger on a ride.

Well i gota say am not a fan of yo gi oh and i have no clue what is gone on here but am quiet enjoying this so far even with the cheasy dialogues lol

So for the grammer English is not my language

loved it can't wait to read the next chapter hope you update soon

Wow, so good to see this update.

And now I'm wondering just exactly How people forge cards and the significance of Numbers here and I'm guessing that they don't require another Number to be destroyed.

And Timaeus makes an appearance quite interesting. And three Witches make sense. With the Grimm around there's no point in making a Ban List.

All this world building and foreshadowing is great

So I was wrong about Yang's signature monster, I thought it was old Red Dragon Archfiend. Still, that was a hell of a duel. I like it. So if Timaeus is involved, does that mean a certain seal will be involved? Also, depending on who uses a warrior based deck, can you give someone Buster Blader to use against someone using Dragons?

wow Weiss is cold here, that finale was awesome, and good to see that Pyrrha isn't relaying on old tricks, and another hint at the Waking the dragons arc is awesome as well, keep up the good work

Loving this fic so far, especially Pyrrha already starting to come out of her shell. Go Go Xiao Long, Force of Nature!

Also, I'm still in absolute awe of how successfully you've made the concept of a duel academy make sense. GX was fun but it made so little sense, but with a concrete reason for card games to matter, that little absurdity becomes simultaneously perfectly reasonable and That Much More Ridiculous.

Not to mention all the absurd secret shit that pops out of nowhere in RWBY is right at home in a series as strange as Yugioh. I swear, sometimes that show makes JJBA look like a cohesive, easily explainable story.

...I'm kinda jealous of Yang, Witch of the Black Forest is one of my favorite cards and she threw down three without getting DQ'd. I guess Hunters don't exactly have ban lists, when you think about it, exactly what would be the point when they're up against Grimm? Banning certain cards might just get people killed.

...on that note, someone in Salem's faction probably has Thousand-Eyes Restrict, don't they. Wonderful...

Still an amazing duel with a hype conclusion. This does have me wonder what Number card’s significants in like here compared to Zexal. Still, I am excited to see more in the future.

I am really enjoying this story

*whistle* well that was something. nice way to end the duel there and stuff. I think my favorite part this chap was the last scene with ozpin and Glynda, more specifically when ozpin was talking to Timaeus. can't wait to learn more about the dragon and ozma's history together and stuff.

though if you don't mind me asking, you think you could explain the numbers a bit, or more specifically the forging part? my knowledge of those things aren't all that much.