I liked a quite this story. I need read more!

Ya know, I can just see ol' Fumblemorts' face if he got a letter from Harry telling him he'd gone to Gringotts, taken an inheritance test and taken everything from every vault he was entitled to out of the country. Followed by " So long and thanks for NOTHING! " I really don't see why Harry even bothers to stay. It's not like the old fool will ever train him to beat Tommy-boy! Nor allow anyone else too. Yeah, the ministry and the public say Hogwash is the safest place in the world but look at the past four years for Harry. That place has been anything but safe! And Fumblemort is the reason why it's so unsafe! He must've been braindead to think that bring that moronic stone into a SCHOOL was a good idea! He hired a teacher to won't teach three quarters of the students. Let's face it! The man is in no way shape or form a General commanding troops! He's more willing to let his own forces be killed than harm the enemy. Regardless of how many innocent men, women and children Vultureworst and his psycho followers have killed! So why should Harry risk his life for a leader who's not worth it? As for the public, they're a bunch of SHEEPLE! Whoever bleats the loudest they follow. Sirius and Remus owe it to James and Lily to get Harry as far away from that Dark Lord masquerading as the Leader of the Light as possible! Let Fumblemort and Vultureworst fight it out and let the rest of the Magical World be! BTW, I read that rant on you profile page and had to agree with it. There's no one forcing anyone to read HP fanfiction. As for the idea of flaming or bashing an author, I ABSOLUTELY REFUSE TO FLAME ANY! If I don't like what they've written, such as slash stories, I simply don't read them! The way I look at it is, there's simply got to be people out there reading it or no one would write it! So as you posted, Don't like, don't read. But I do like your story. I'm not a fan of Hermione betraying Harry but this is still a n damn good story!

This obviously isn't an H/Hr story. It's also quite obvious that good ol' Fumblemort is sticking his nose where it doesn't belong once again. It's really too bad Harry didn't hold onto his rage a little longer. Say long enough to blast his way into the kitchen to confront the so called leader of the light? In his place I would've and then told them that as they treated my very first and best friend in such a manner they were now on their own fighting Vultureworst. Or maybe I'd just blast ol' Fumblemort with everything I had. You know something very like the Bombardia spell/curse/hex/jinx or whatever it is. Caught completely off guard like that it just might've blown him all over the room. No great loss I feel.

This is starting to get interesting. Hope you keep up the good work!

I enjoy this story. Which for me is a problem when it comes to you. The stories you write which I don't like, you complete them. The ones I like usually get abandoned or deleted.

Please update :( I like this story

I enjoy your stories and await your updates. Unable to log in using old kindle fire tablet.

I just found this out and I really like it so far. I am very curious to see where this goes. I do ever enjoy a gray Harry Potter. Balance in all things must be maintained after all.

A decent start, though I hope it doesn’t become a Harry lectures people story.

Recommended.

I love this story and hope you keep writing it, adored Harry and Sirius both putting Molly in her place, that is one of the many things I wished had happened in cannon, it really annoyed me how Molly steamrollered over Sirius and Harry. Would also love it if you could give Arthur a backbone. Hope you are keeping safe in these hard times many thanks

Man, this is good! It's funny in a lot of parts but Sirius in others. I can't say I blame Harry for declaring his own faction though. Nor for thinking that Fudge and Fumblemort will have a pissing contest during his trial. I wonder if either or both would shit themselves if Harry stood up and declared he was leaving the country and letting the two Dark Lords fight it out. I trust Fumblemolrt about as far as I can throw the Black Hole at the center of our galaxy! And Fudge will gladly sell out his own mother for a bag of gold! So Harry standing up, declaring the Wizengamott totally corrupt and he was leaving the country never to return would likely make Vulturewart very happy for as long as it takes him to conquer and suppress the country. Of course, by then if the Goblins were smart, they'd've moved all the gold in Gringotts out of the country. This would leave Vulturewart with no money to fight his war, buy the potion ingredients he wants/needs nor pay anyone. So a win/win for the light.

Question. What childhood? Fumblemort made damn sure Harry had a wonderful early slave training period. Harrys' childhood ended on the night Fumblemort, McGonagall and Hagrid left him on the Dursleys' doorstep. Then didn't bother to check up on him as he( Fumblemort ) just knew Harry'd be treated right. He ( Fumblemort ) continued to do whatever he could to ensure Harrys' life was totally shit ever since. Ya know, Hermione should be real careful around Harry. She may just owe him a Life Debt for the Troll in first year.

I'm saddened to read Hermione STILL siding with Fumblemort over Harry. I also want to know just what Fumblmort promised or gave her to betray Harry. I'm very glad that the twins found, rescued and reunited Hedwig with Harry. What DOESN'T surprised me is Fumblemort keeping her from Harry. It was, after all, for Harrys' safety. HA! As if! It's like Fumblemort can't see that all he's doing is driving Harry further and further away. In Harry's place, I'd simply leave the two Dark Lords to fight it out between themselves. It's not like either one is truly helping the magical world in Briton after all.

Harry had the perfect chance to escape and get to Gringotts to find out about his accounts. I don't trust Fumblemort and hid Order of the Fried Chicken. Fumblemort would need money to fight his war and it'd have to come from somewhere. And there's no way in hell that I'll believe that Fumbleort would use his own money! And if he's been keeping Harry in the dark about the goings-on in the Order and magical world, why wouldn't he simply take the money from Harry's accounts? To him, it's not like Harry's gonna need it for after Hogwarts after all. Why just look at all that fantastic training he's been giving Harry over the years! So while at Gringotts Harry should look into escaping the country. Leave Fumblemort and Vulturewart to fight it out. Dark Lord to Dark Lord.

Oh this story is really good so far.