Hey I’m really liking this story so far, an awesome group of characters and now that they’ve gotten to remnant I’m interested to see how it plays out. With that said I hope you update soon! On a side note one question, how old is Drake?

I hope to see more Jek in action!

Okay not bad of a chapter, a bit quick but still good however theirs an issue ive notice, what did the Buzz Droids do to the Hangars if they cant launch any ships? If they Shield of the Hangar is gone they can use Oxygen tanks, if the doors to the Hangar are locked they can cut through it, if for some reason the Hangar doors are activated and closed the hangar then blow it up, i dont see an issue to this specially with a Resurgence-Class with multiple Variety of hangar doors.

Alright so far so good though tbe pacing is a bit quick and what i mean is that well the story is rushing just a bit not too much but still fine, also needs a bit detailing though one issue i notice is the Resurgence not able to launch shuttles or fighters, they have shielded Hangars that lets fighters leave quickly without issue , even if theirs no oxygen in the Hangar they have Oxygen Tanks, if the doors are locked they can cut through it so i dont see any issue

Alright not bad though the pacing of the story is a bit quick but nevertheless still fine.. Probably but anyway still good also needs a bit of details but still fine

Well good chapter and poor zack he has not found any jedi here you know i think jedi fallen order cal kestis and rebels Phoenix squadron kannan and and ezra after season 2 mid season 3 could appear has a cameo or a one shot chapter.

Oh boy Zack their was going Dark Side and with that tracker on them means that Cromwell is going to be a continuing antagonist for the gang and Remnant itself.

Woah wait a minute a resurgent class but that a first order ship and it's a prototype ok that to much star wars sequel but hey why making remnant the homeworld of the jedi and how does the god of light and darkness and all the ozpin and salem secret war play in it his it not typhon the homeworld of the jedi in the old republic.

Hope to see zack vs the fourth sister fight, would be cool that salem his then interested in the jedi old relic or ancient text and also she try to seduce zack not flirt of courses but try to join her and the fouth sister to the dark side like Palpatine did with anakin.

At least the fourth sister will go to remnant.

What do you think of the new star wars the high republic amd his it gonna play a role in your story when zack talk to his friends on remnant to some old jedi stories.

And thus the fourth character is introduced nice, and i see that you used some elements from Fallen Order with Stun Baton Scout Troopers, great stuff still though kinda curious; is Jek voice sound like the normal B2 Super Battle Droid voice or something different?

Good chapter

Mandalorian vs Mandalorian this his the way. But drake want revenge on vader that not good idea, it will be cool that remnant have a ancient jedi temple that neither ozpin/ozma and salem has saw and it was hidden in the time of the light and dark god only revan has created this temple in the old republic.

His the young jedi tom will fall in love with ruby rose it will be cool to see young jedi (zack) x ruby rose. Galen marek has arrived yes! Since ram has a green lightsaber and Galen has a blue lightsaber which color was zack lightsaber again?

Alright this is interesting, very interested with the Super Battle Droid and the BB Unit, Though its a bit of a surprised you added BB Units this early in the Timeline but then again this is a mixture of Legends and Canon so theirs no trouble

I love Jek! I can honestly imagine General Grievous seeing him and saying, “Ah, the negotiated” after Jek spoke to the people. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Now we got Jek, my new favorite character in this story as I love Robots and he reminds me a bit of Chappie. Great work.

When the jedi survivor will take action on remnant.