Man, Ari is kinda really judgy, huh? I’m not sure if there’s been anyone introduced that she’s genuinely liked with no reservations. Well, besides Nobuo I guess. I’m curious to see if there will be anyone else that she hits it off with. She’s going to need friends in a place like this.

But, most importantly, we met Aoki! Who seems to have had to deal with some boy immediately hitting on her, the poor dear. That’s certainly one way to start a kidnapping experience. I know that you had some trouble writing her, but I enjoyed her section a lot. And I really hope that she finds Harlan wandering somewhere in these halls. I mean, he WAS right there with her so it makes sense that he would be kidnapped too. Wink wink.

Beyond that, really like both the Mono staff. They seem like a ton of fun, and the idea of having RAs is interesting. I’m looking forward to seeing how that will play out.

What a interesting bunch of characters. My child that I can't wait to see how you use him, A Jeweler who's personality I just love, A fun loving Chad Zipliner who I can't help but love as well and a creepy butler on top of that. The cast is looking to be a interesting set of characters. Sorry I haven't gotten the chance to review in a bit. I have been quite busy but I will try to review from now on!

Oh this is exciting! ! It was great fun seeing the first lot if accepted characters! I aldo liked the bit at the beginning, with Arihime's friends and the discussions thry were having. I wonder if those scandals/stories will have any bearing on the story at large.
Anyway, great work as always

Ahhhh a surprise update! :D This was a pleasant thing to wake up to! I have to say, I was impressed by this one, Sona. A nice introduction, a little background on Ari and her mission and introductions to the first lot of students. Good pacing and not too drawn out either, very good! I adore Ari, her little quips, comments and opinions. Super snarky. Her relationship with Takeshi was very interesting to see too. Those two are gonna be like 'friendly' rivals, I know it. I wonder how it will change during the course of the game. Gotta love Takeshi and his attitude, I wonder just how good of a detective he is if he's a police officer. We shall see in the class trials~ Then comes Princess Pompous herself! You wrote her spectacularly and I loved her and Ari's interactions. Just as I envisioned, although I find it hilarious she wasn't actually kidnapped or knocked out and just told to play her instrument XD And then chasing after Takeshi was just gold~ Now onto the next two, Kuromiiii I love you, finally a sensible and friendly person, we love you~! And angry boy Arata! (ahem - and prime hottie ahem). Looking forward to seeing more of him~ But my favourite intro of all: DAIZO YOU ARE MY BEAN BABY I WILL PROTECT YOU. YOU HEAR ME? I. WILL. PROTECT. YOU. Spider loving baby is adorable... (Lando if you see this, PLEASE make more beans like him! x) I really hope he isn't an early goner, he is pretty vulnerable being wheelchair bound and blind, but I love him so much. One of my early faves along with Kuromi. And Monomaid...hmm, definitely interesting. Human I see. Gotta love it. I wonder what our next additions will be like~ Looking forward to meeting them either way, best of luck with everything Sona and I'll try and review the other two fics soon :) xx

I'm a little late getting to the review, but this was a fun chapter, and seeing how all of the characters are. You did a wonderful job with Arata, and I can't wait to see what's all in store

Finally got to sit down and give this a thorough read, and holy crap! This is so so good. all the little details, plus Arihime is amazing. I already thought she was fun from the intro, but I love all the little quirks and nuances you've given her. And as I said before, this premise is super intriguing to me. I can't wait to see how this goes!

Hehe, I didn't know about the similarities about the character's personalities with most of them consisting of angry, passive aggressive, and cold types of characters you got there, these are very noticeable especially when you're being sent a ton of OCs, and my OC may have probably had one of those character traits (I'm assuming it's the cold type with my OCs case) however I shall not fret and will instead wait for the next update, I shall also be anticipating the next episode and I can't wait to see the OCs you accept to be used in the story! So even though my OC hasn't been accepted yet (As of the time of this review), I'm not gonna beg for a spot and complain for my OC not being accepted, instead I'll wait more and will continue to await more from this story, and I will instead be getting excited to see the characters and how each of them are used.

I hope you'll be alright with the pandemic currently going on so I wish you the best, And I shall be anticipating the next chapter and for when this story officially begins, as for now, PEACE OUT!

I honestly didn't realize that there would be so many angry personalities in the OC submissions, guess i better write up a new one lol.
I'm very excited to see what's to come. Good luck on the rest of the submissions!

Ay, alright so this chap was nice! :). I really liked the new development of Arihime, she's definitely gonna be a favorite of mine moving on. It's not surprising that she was knocked out tbh; if anything it's a replica of hopes' peak so its gonna be similar.
This chap also gave more insights on Ari's personality, so I liked that. she seems really stubborn, but I can relate lol. I'm hyped to see how everything plays out with her journalism and all that, and how that's gonna incorporate into the story.
Probably gonna work on a trib today, but nice job on this chapter again lol

hey! I'm new to the community, but I thought I'd just review this cause it seemed really interesting, so here I am lmao.
I really like Arihime! I didn't even know past ari so she's new to me lol. She seems chill and has a good vibe, but she's sort of mysterious at the same time, so it leaves me hOoKeD about what's gonna happen next. it actually seems likely hopes' peak would have a rival school, so I'm hyped for where this is gonna go.
I'll probably submit sooner or later, maybe tonight but idk. I'm excited for where this is going :))

I’m enjoying this more and more! I’m currently working on 2 OC’s right now. One for this story and one for Remnants of heart. The RH character has been in development since over a year...trying to get him just right. I’m having problems tho...I’m not so good when it comes to descriptions. So it’s taking longer then I thought for both. Really hope I can send them to you soon I’ve been working hard on em (that and I’m 100% sure you’ve never seen these talents). Keep up with the fun!

This is an awesome start Sona! Let's start the new decade with one of your top quality stories :D

Great chapter. I love this new one and how it revealed a bit Arihime's personal life

Hey, this was a nice surprise! I really enjoyed the chapter and seeing a bit more of Arihime's life! I look forward to whatever update you make next

late june... i have time then. Hi, guess you don't remember me, but when i'm done with exams I'll submit an OC, don't worry