Thanks for the chapter

Well back to dead story again what point continue it took you 8 years still stuck on season 2

now shirou is experiencing what Acher has been through, impotence and weakness so making him make a contract with alaya for power, and the way that shirou is sacrificing his body he will becoming an Acher lily quickly, (laughs).

Holy shit, I still remember when I read the first entry to this series all those years ago. Seeing this now was a trip down memory lane. Glad to see it's back up again for the foreseeable future.

Nice bits so far. Personally, I'm a fan of seeing Yuuno actually getting screentime after later entries in the Nanoha franchise shunted him to the wayside. Divergences from canon aren't breaking anything for me yet, and I'm eager to see where this adventure goes.

Good luck, and looking forward to next time.

Kinda gotta agree with AriFrost

Quote "If I had to point to one thing that stands out to me as a serious flaw of this story so far, it would be interactions between Nanoha and Shirou. I'm not much of a Lyrical Nanoha fan but it feels like whenever they talk Nanoha talks AT him instead of WITH him, and the story basically treats her like she can do no wrong no matter how she acts or what she says. That by itself isn't so jarring as when you combine it with the fact that it is said over and over again that they are friends and how Nanoha wants to help him be happy, when I can't feel it when they talk. You see some banter or teasing but it is purely one sided and there is nothing beyond that when they speak. Other than worrying about him as part of the "Yelling at injured Shirou" gig and hammering away at the "SHIROU IS STUPID" button, she seems like a crappy friend to him. When she meets Fate she goes to ridiculous lengths to befriend and understand her, even though she just met her, yet she only asks about the Fuyuki Fire after knowing Shirou for years. It feels more like she bullies her way through his daily life instead of actually trying to get to know him, why he does what he does, what makes him so desperate to help others etc." Unquote.

Cool story. Intereatimg crossover i do have a question though so far its just been a rather one sided crossover do you plan to eventually do the grail war and other nasuverse stories/characters?

Now, how long until he gets a proper device so he isn’t nearly useless?

obrigado pelo capitulo

Glad you’ve updated. Hoping Yuuno is alright!

Yuuno is awesome.

Well I am glad you started writing again. I really hope Shirou gets some kind of protective equipment with how brutual the enemy seems to be he's going to need it. It would also be nice if he got something while Nanoha and Fate get upgrades to thier Device.

Praise be to Santo.

I hope you're able to stay safe and healthy in these trying times.

Very nice fight scenes, and I personally like it that you gave Yuuno some time to shine.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Aww yisss the fic is really coming back with updates

Butterflies at this arc are flapping their wings with who fought who and the Wolkeritter not getting all the mana of both Fate and Nanoha

Fight scenes are awesome, Yuuno is a wrecking ball as a fighter and Shirou would not go down unless forced. Nice

PS. Also does this mean the rewrite is not continuing? Shame that was also well written and going tangent in a different manner

Be careful out there especially with the virus

oooooooh, damn Yuuno's being pretty badass here, and do i sense Yuuno/Nanoha pairing?