I love how you gave insight to the Hokages thoughts, as well as seeing how far team rou would go for one of their own. I really hope the Uchiha situation would get solved in a non-bloody way. Or that Itachi, shisui and sasuke remain out of it. I loved the chapter

Love this so far :)

This seems out of character for Obito. He cares too much about his friends and Minato to be late picking up Naruto. The woman ignoring her toddler playing in the freaking street needs a good spanking.

An wrecking ball raised by a scalpel.

I love the naruhina. Heck yes. Keep it coming.

Hmmm, so someone stole one of Genma's idea pages. Who could have done so? And will they even all make it back from the mission for it to matter?

Very interesting insight into both Hiruzen and Itachi's state of mind and thoughts... especially liked Itachi's desire to be more of a normal kid.

Ehm... *four of the five members of Team Rou* Raidou, Genma, Hayate, Tenzou/Yamato, Itachi, Kakashi... correct me if I'm wrong, but that makes six... or am I misreading something?

Also, slight correction: Debriefings are after a mission... before a mission, it is called briefing.

Well, personally, I was more of a NaruSaku supporter... but that was many years ago, and mostly because it was what made sense to me... that, and it was fun to rile up some of the NaruHina fanatics... personally, I think that if you want to add some of those moments as you describe, fine... but then you may as well go ahead and introduce the rest of the future Rookie Nine.

Lastly... love chibi Sasuke XD

Curious to see what happens next

Yours sincerely,

Lightningscar

Hello. New reader here :)

Personally, one of the things I always ask myself when writing a story/fanfic is: Why are you writing it? For reviews, for the love of the fandom, because someone came with a request/challenge, or for yourself? To me, the latter is the most important. If you have story/fanfic that you would like to share, write it. Not because someone is telling you to, but because you want to and enjoy the story.

Anyway.

Like the story a lot :) Love Kakashi-adopts/become Naruto's guardian... Naruto is such a cute little chibi XD Also love the inclusion of Itachi and Shisui and how much they trust Kakashi.
Kakashi and Obito, face it, you have gotten two younger brothers in those two Uchiha youngsters XD
Speaking of Itachi, love seeing him be somewhat more childlike... Kami knows he deserves it... and now, I have thw picture of him snoggling up among Kakashi's ninken for a little nap (blackmail for Shisui) or someone (again, most likely being Shisui) stealing his dango and being the annoying older brother and keeping it out of Itachi's reach XD

Love the story and very curious to see how things with the coup goes down.

Yours sincerely,

Lightningscar

Best writer doesn't mean much. Fanfiction is about showing your passion for a manga/character in written form. As long as your point gets across, it doesn't have to be perfect. That only counts if you plan on selling something. Fun writing shouldn't have you curled up in dread over whether everything was spelled perfectly or what. Just so long as it makes sense and readers can understand you, then you are a GOOD writer!~ With that said, I'm glad you have more confidence in continuing. It'll feel absolutely amazing when you finish it.

As for the chapter, things are certainly getting exciting. Heh, poor Kakashi, as if his life wasn't eventful enough as it is.

Love how you brought in Itachi and his dango, it just tickles me to death whenever an author mentions it! Poor Kakashi, he just never gets a break. Loving this story so far and thank you for continuing to write it!

I love this story.

So Tobi is Zetsu I think, but who is this woman he keeps calling Master... she said Konoha hurt her, I can’t think of anyone except Tsunade but I don’t it’s her.

Hi, just wanted to let you know that you accidentally uploaded chapter 6 twice, chapter 7 is a duplicate of chapter 6.

this is a really good fanfic. hopefully there will be another chapter someday

Naruto must be a really cute toddler with his big blue eyes and golden hair. By the way, you keep on calling him and Sasuke infant, they’re three yrs old so they are toddlers or babies but not infant. Infant is usually from newborn to maybe 2 months I think. It was just weird to me whenever I read the word infant. I’m really sorry for saying that.