ahh! how could u end it there? i wanna know what happens

God your Ayame seems kind of nice... so much better and really would like a romance between Fluffy Sama and Rin...
And would you agreed to be kidnapped by me and come to live with me in India, will you?

Asdfhjlgl so good! My brain was racing right along with Kagome’s! (And you absolutely NAILED how medical school feels... felt. Brain overload). And now my heart is racing because WHO WAS THAT?! And is Inuyasha talking about Kagome in the preview or is it SOMEONE ELSE?! I seriously CANNOT WAIT for the next update. You’re amazing.

Okay. Here goes.
Naraku was killing off hanyous from Dr. Suzuki's hospital to be absorbed into him to make him stronger because he is a power hungry monster. Sara was suspicious and investigates the doctor's apparent suicide with Jinenji. (Okay that part was explained) The big guy who stole Sara's body who is not too bright is Goshinki.
This whole thing is orchestrated because Naraku is the underground Overlord and runs the city with the mayor as a puppet but wants more. Sesshomaru is next because Naraku wants all prominent businesses under his foot so he can rule the world. (insert maniacal laugh)

God, I forget I asked you to run away with me, didn't I?
Run away with me oh almighty author of mine...

Oh,I am so sorry I haven't been able to ready but God your Inuyasha is hella sexy.

It's was a brilliant read. Hope you are doing well and staying safe.

I hope Kagome lives with InuYasha and Run is there in this fic somewhere.
I hope fuffy Sama is not an asshole.
p.s Hope you and yours are fine and safe.

I have guesses but I'll wait (im)patiently till the next chapter. Loved this chapter.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmannnnnnnnnnnnnnnn this chapter turned such a crappy day around! I loved the little moments between them, the "not a date", Sango and Miroku, and now! Action!

I am SO EXCITED.

this chapter was SO GOOD. I really, REALLY enjoyed it! I really liked the interactions between Kagome, Sango and Miroku! They were sweet but hilarious, how teasing they are towards Kagome.
I love Ayame here, she's so fresh! and I like it that you made her Inuyasha's friend, well, sort off.
And last but not least: who was the one who hit Kagome? I mean for the preview it seems Inuyasha is talking to Sesshoumaru, but I don't think he would actually hit Kagome so... maybe is someone from the Sakura Clinic? Maybe it was the same man who gave the orders when they were taking Sara's body? I'm so intrigued!
I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE EVERYTHING YOU WRITE YOU ARE AMAZING, THIS STORY IS HUGE AND GREAT AND AAAH, LOVE YOU!

I don't have enough language skills to leave a review after this chapter. English is not my first language and I can't describe how giddy I felt reading this. How words trapped me and I was zooming in like crazy into all the tiny details you leave behind like breadcrumbs showing how Inuyasha likes Kagome. And all that while writing a damn mistery! Slow clapping for you, Witchy!

Okay, so first of all, I read all your stuff and I love every word that you write. So talented and creative and the way you construct narrative is basically perfection.

But I want to give you additional props for this story. I adore this Inuyasha; the personality quirks really shine through and make him intriguing, annoying, and entirely relatable. Writing a mystery is so, so hard-so many ends to keep track of, and having to be constantly aware of what each character is doing, how it connects to the plot, how each little piece connects to the overarching narrative... you do this really, really, well.

Thank you for sharing this story with us! I cannot wait to read more.

Oh my god. lol now things make a little more sense. haha. I missed this chapter. It got buried in my email.

Okaaaay, mystery deepens with both the case and Sess and Rin. Hmm! and I do so love the bickering with Inu and co. *smirks*

Mal

You are one of my favorite authors on this site, because aside from being a genuinely good writer, you have some seriously original ideas.

I love the characterization you’ve given Inuyasha, it’s unique as hell and so damn interesting. It seems to me that he may actually be the borderline psychopath, but not unintentionally. His disdain for literally everyone is clearly backed up by being empirically unsupported not just in his personal life but his professional life as well. I mean imagine proving to people every single day how valuable you are and still being considered less-than by society. It’s no wonder that he forces himself to be unemotional.
I LOVE how much he believes in kagome. It’s fucking refreshing, I’m so tired of reading the same details about him in story after story where he’s a merciless dick to everyone for seemingly no reason at all including kagome and he fights his feelings for her. This is so different. He acknowledges the feelings of validity that bubble up in him from being with her, he recognizes that she makes him feel seen when so many others don’t. He believes in her intelligence from the moment he meets her and it doesn’t stop. He keeps telling her “stop pretending to be stupid”, and it doesn’t occur to him that she could be confused or just genuinely in the dark (like most people he encounters usually are), he believes in her enough to keep pushing because he sees her potential. I also love how strong she is, I LOVE that she pushes back and tells him when he’s being an ass. And I love that he cares what she thinks, because he doesn’t give a shit what anyone else thinks aside from her.

The sheer amount of intellectual validation happening over her is just *chef’s kiss*.

It’s delicious. I adore it. I need more please.

I LOVE THAT YOU MADE HIM A BORDERLINE SOCIOPATHIC GENUIS. Your writing is blowing me away with how intricate the details of the mystery are, I don’t know how you keep this all straight while constructing your story. It’s hard enough to write a good story even without the intricacies of a murder mystery involving multiple victims. I applaud you immensely.

You are getting me through quarantine. You are helping me feel less like I’m stuck where I am. Please please please update soon.

Sidebar: he clicks his nails a lot. Like a lot a lot. I wonder if that’s gonna be a bigger thing, or if it’s just one of his little ticks. Either way you’ve got me.

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